I don't really like the ages you put them as

I really quite likes this story but I did feel the romance was lacking a little. Probably because Felicity was trying to stay away from Sam so much then all of a sudden they were just together. I would have liked to have seen more interaction between them. Also it was Laurel who comforted her after her father died. it was nice, but I would have liked to have seen Sam doing that. I don't want you to think I am bashing in any way I just wanted to help be constructive. Because this was a very good story and it is completed with is an accomplishment in and of its self.

Great story! I enjoyed every twist and turn, and to make the story better you stayed true to the timeline, although I'm a bit confused when in spn time this takes place. Also what's up with Sara?

Hey! I am so very, very late to the party on this one seeing as I've been out of the country, but I just wanted to make sure I said a little something about this story and the ending and everything. So here's my something: I LOVED IT.

Yes, quite vague, I know. But in all seriousness, I think you created such an incredibly rich story here, combining two separate sets of characters into one storyline quite seamlessly. I love that Dean has the option to take on the Arrow's responsibility, and I loved the line from Oliver's letter: "The Arrow can be anybody with the will and means to fight evil." It's amazing that Sam gets a happy ending, because that is such a rarity in the show, and I loved seeing him so happy. The Dean/Laurel thing is super interesting and I could actually see that working out. I love that you left so many things still undiscovered and have room for an expansion (should you be so inspired) because I just think there are so many awesome ways to take this story. For now, I will just say that I really enjoyed it for everything that it was, and I was sorry to see it end (but the way it ended was basically the best outcome I could've imagined). Awesome!

I've been following this story for a while now. I really like it! It combines the best tv shows ever! Thanks for writing:)

Awesome ending. But sadly, this fun story has come to an end. I can't wait to find out what Dean decides about The Arrow and Laurel. I'm also interested to see why Sara doesn't seem to like the Winchester brothers. There are so many possibilities for a sequel. Thanks for a great story. :)

I did enjoy the story and it was well written, but I would have stretched it out just a bit further showing the decision Dean make. If you do write a sequel you could have started it anytime you wanted without doing a prologue or some other exposition. That being said... GREAT JOB!

Awesome story :)

No...No...No... I can't be over yet*sobbing*!

I was already sad because of the ending of a certain TV show last night, but now after reading this chapter I'm very sad. Both scenes were well done and definitely leave some questions for a sequel with Oliver's trip to Central City and the situation between Dean and Laurel. And this envelope is so mysterious. Dean needs to open it as soon as possible! Looking forward to the epilogue and I'm really hoping there's a sequel.

Great update :)

It's really great

Great conversation with Sam and Dean talking about Laurel. There were a lot of great lines in this chapter, too. And so much sadness thinking about what's coming for Sam and Dean. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I think I'll be kind of sad if Dean and Laurel don't end up together. Somehow it just makes sense.

Sam: "So, you're getting dressed to go yell at him?"
Felicity: "Yes, I suppose so."
Haha. Loved it! I'm not sure what Oliver will do without Felicity, but I'm glad she'll be happy with Sam.

Of course Oliver didn't take any pain medication because that's what normal people do. Loved the scene with Oliver and Dean. It's always so interesting when they hang out.

I think Laurel and Dean could work together. Although, I'm pretty sure Laurel's dad won't like Dean very much, but I'm interested to see what you decide to do with this. And poor Sam with this big decision awaiting him. It's going to be difficult either way.