I didn’t mind the way it ended. Thought it was a nice rounded finish to a part one or something. Would I have liked more? Definitely yes. But I’ll take what I can get haha! Thanks! Thoroughly enjoyed this.

I’m proud that I understood some of the German words in this chapter, because my slow weeks of studying German is finally paying off.

This was an excellent story. I loved it. I’m quite sad you didn’t continue it. I’ll follow you just in case you ever decide to pick them back up.

I’ve been reading some of the comments and honestly I don’t know why they expect something “realistic” and think the character is too “Mary-sue”. This is fanfiction not real life. If they want realistic they should get off the internet and live in the real world. Heck maybe, I don’t know read something else. You’re the author, you can be as creative as you like. I agree with a guest who reviewed where they said that people don’t question characters that are too “perfect” like Batman and whatnot. Yet they feel the need to do it in fan fiction stories, some of them don’t even offer ways for you to have “improved” your character, all they do is whine that she’s to much of a “Mary-sue”. I hope you do one day come back to this story.

I hate being this kind of person (eh sometimes) but at the beginning of your chapter you kind of switched to 3rd person for a split second. It’s in the very first sentence and after the coma. It went from “my” to “her”. Unless she was walking with someone and threw her book bag over their shoulder. Just wanted to let you know

i've never read any books from before Bucky was the winter soldier and steve was frozen in ice but this is the first one i read and i love it

This is one of my favorite stories, and as such I would greatly appreciate it if you could continue either this story with the winter soldier or continue your rewrite of it.

sad

DONT NEED A BED AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH

“stroking my ego”? Disappointed that there wasn’t a dirty joke lmao

only read the first few paragraphs of this chapter but im getting a kingsmen vibe from this and i LOVE that!

Stunning story

I love this story and I hope you will come back to this story soon. I would love to see Bucky and Josie's story play out fully. And I really want to see them reunited. Bucky is one of my favorite characters in the movies and it's hard to find good stories for him amdnthis one was really good.

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LOL the way he pulled back his alcohol, reminds me of Captain Jack Sparrow with the jar of dirt!