Absolutely brilliant!
Loved the political aspect of the story.

this nigga really just

Ohhhhh my God. This whole story has been so incredible! I have been swept along for days now, and I'm honestly about to go back and re-read it again right now. Love it love it love it. I really appreciate all the care and thought you put into how Hermione rationalizes things, and how she draws her lines. It feels very real and human and it really works. And Tom is so we'll written, he's another character with a lot of depth. It's all so good! I don't wanna totally bombard you with a novel length comment here, but thank you for such an amazing read!

Fantastic take on the Tomione time travel idea! Loved the twists in Hermione’s and Tom’s personalities.

brilliant so far but should be labelled as incomplete or abandoned.

sis had literally been abducted TWICE before this point so I'm confused to why she didn't try to sharpen her occlumency skills in between then. dumbles and Tom both broke her walls like it was nothing. you would think that she'd put more time in learning to how correct that since her occlumency skills seem to be rudimentary at best.

I LOOOVED this

When Hermione was hiding I didn't notice I was breathing very quietly and slow until the scene was done.

Loved their characterizations sooooo much

I think this is really an amazing story so far with really interesting new developments! But I’m just wondering why Hermione has been through a war but can still be so easily disarmed?

This was one of the best Tomione stories I’ve read. I love that neither of them lose themselves completely in this story. Thanks for sharing!

You did an absolutely wonderful job on this. I've been on a Tomione kick lately and it makes me question my morals haha. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. I'll make my way over to A Marked Deck because I can't get enough.

In all the Tomione fics I've ever read, your Tom is the Tom that I continuously crawl back to, because he is exactly the Tom that I hoped he would be in my mind. And your plot is exquisite.
The line between pure white and stark black is always a bit obscure in my mind, and you completely nailed it.
Thank you so much for this amazing story. All the best wished to you.

I'm not a fan of BDSM. So when you mentioned Fifty Shades of Grey as one of your inspirations in creating this story I imagined lots of hexes or curses or whatever to intensify pleasure.
And towards the epligoue, I would imagine Hermione in her death bed. Then Tom tells their children that their mother is waiting for him. And Hermione and Tom are reunited again in the "King's Cross".

What the fudge isn't it a bit too early for Tom to know? Not that I'm complaining