I looove everything! I hope inspiration comes soon so you can keep writing this fic.

This story was amazingly written. Kudos to you. Hope you can continue it in the near future

Kinda annoyed that you skipped over what the ritual is or how they even came across it. you should definitely put order bashing in the summary if this is the direction you are going. (mar 2017)

Update please! This is such a great story

This story has amazing complexity. There is a great deal of thought and suspense in the plot. It definitely had me on the edge nearly all the time. Never knowing what was waiting around the corner. You are a truly gifted writer. Harry's personality and all the other characters are nearly spot on. Truly. Andromeda shocked me the most, and you left a huge mystery of teddy and where he was and what he would think knowing his grandmother was involved in his parents murder. Because yes, regardless of the reason why it happened, tonks and lupin were murdered and they're deaths were the catalyst that purged harry of his magic. Bill's death was a sad but great shock, another suprise. And fluer's reaction is spot on for how some people cope in those situations. Harry and hermione's complex relationship is deeply and intuitively thought out and is the core of the story. With other important parts being Ron's loyalty and this Julia's disloyalty and harsh, hurtful intent towards harry. Ginny had a strange but welcome new mystery to her, as well as Luna. Great plot and story. There are a few plot holes but I feel that if you continue this story then you should introduce flashbacks or memories from Arthur, molly, andromeda, or Kingsley involving how they did the ritual. Their thoughts on why it was neccesary and especially Albus Dumbledore's role and true feelings regarding the matter. I think it would fit if Albus was against this kind of plan to do this to harry, showing his protectiveness of him. And how his tragic death spurred andromeda, Arthur, aberforth, and the others to take the drastic back up plan should harry survive his encounter with Voldemort. It drives a certain mystery and complexity into real life where the ones we trust and "think" we know are actually our enemies in truth. Wonderful writing. Also, minerva mcgonagall should be present in harry's army, as you so eloquently named it lol. I believe she can help harry regain his skills and powerful intuition regarding battle magic. Also, give harry and the others a goal in mind to fight for other than plain revenge. Keep it realistic with the muggles, and they're fears regarding what they don't understand and as the famous saying goes, "people fear and seek to destroy what they don't understand ". But, really you could make this story go either way. Really dark, foreboding and mysterious. Or an eventual light at the end of the tunnel and a long term peaceful solution after a hard fought and won peace. And, include a good epilogue. That's all my thoughts regarding this story, please do not give up on it. Update please! I love this story!

This is just amazing! The tone is so melancholy and foreboding. I5 works really well with this story. My heart breaks for Ron, and George, and Ginny. They’ve lost their beloved Bill and discovered horrible truths about their family. Poor Fleur. Devastating!
I’m fascinated by the Order and who is part of this plot. Ugh!
Looking forward to seeing what happens in Godric’s Hollow and who shows up.
Amazing! Truly!

Please update!plllllllllllleeeeeeaaaaaaaasssseeeee!

While I enjoyed your other pieces, this one, not so much.

It's little surprise to me that you've writer's block with this piece. Frankly, the plot has too many holes to hold together into a coherent narrative. For instance, Julia is living with him as part of a grand conspiracy/betrayal, yet the Minster of Magic can't locate Harry? This doesn't make any sense at all. The Order is willing to slay Tonks and Remus, yet they instead do some elaborate ritual to remove Harry's magic vs. just kill him and be done with him (or, barring that, why not just dose him to the gills with Draught of Living Death and stash him in a Ministry holding pen to be used as needed?). What's the reason they need the Hallow? Without justification, this seems contrived. Susan's betrayal without foreshadowing of any kind just seemed too contrived as well. And Harry's just happening to have happenstance make the events needed (his heart stopping, Bill dying) for his magic to return, again, felt too convenient.

We haven't seen enough of the Muggles to take them seriously as a threat. And the Order, as a grand evil willing to commit atrocities to protect themselves from the Muggles was not something I can easily buy as a reader.

I hate to say it, but, you're perhaps better scrapping this story and focusing on other stories since it has too much that just doesn't ring true. If you want to go the route of an action/suspense thriller in the future, you're going to need to do more disciplined plotting.

This is such an amazing story, it’s kind of tragic that it’s unfinished. I dearly hope you come back to it one day.

Would love to see the end

it's a shame you never completed this.

I love this story. It is rich with believable complexity. Please pick it back up.

Wow. This brought tears to my eyes.

You know, I just have to say, this narration is really good and the story itself is awesome. You have to continue it! Please let me know if you do. This is GOOD.

Thank you so much for writing and I sincerely hope you don't stop.

OH tienes que continuar!