I noticed you named Beth's husband as Louis at the top of this chapter (12), but Beth called him Mark in Chapter 10...just a little continuity error I noticed. Love this story so far, though!

Thank you ! Well, I really believed that his former wife was the kiddnaper... I never thought of Jane as Jack adoptive daughter, but it seem like a great idea ! Loved how everybody move to save Phryne at the beginning ! It was pretty good ! I got a good time reading this, thanks !

Your story and especially your characters are soooo woderful, I can't thank you enough for creating this little piece of heaven :-)

I hope you will be writing a sexy epilogue soon?

Tegan

To be honest, I found this a bit hard to read because of the way it switched between first and third person. The long paragraphs were also trying to follow. Otherwise, great story!

Love this story! I'm thrilled with the way your portray the characters and how you really got in their heads! Can't wait to read more!

I am such a fan of the show and books so very happy to find some fanfiction for it. It was a great story and I loved it, I hope to read another Miss Fisher story from you so.

GREAT STORY!

it doesn't load the last chapters. Fot me it says there are only 16 chapters

please update. please please. you can't end it like this

I enjoyed your plot very much, and really liked how you fleshed out Jack's family members. I hope the epilogue won't be too smutty, but very passionate. One of the best things about Phryne and Jack is the very loud yet unspoken unconditional love they have for one another. I adore Phrack and want nothing less than consummation, but smut IMHO will cheapen the relationship that you have so wonderfully painted. Thanks so much for sharing your creativity.

I didn't review your story chapter by chapter, deciding instead to read it like a very enjoyable book. I would love to see an epilogue, but I am hoping for more passion than smut. You have captured the essence of the very "loudly unspoken" unconditional love shared by Phryne and Jack. IMHO, very graphic smut will detract from the depth and breadth of their connection. People would give limbs to have this kind of relationship, and the Phrack consummation would be spectacular because of anticipation, feelings, deep commitment, a desire to pleasure and fulfill one another, and each one's personal thoughts during the lovemaking. Dirty talk, swinging from chandeliers, descriptions of contorted positioning, etc. would cheapen it. No matter how you decide to proceed, thanks for a wonderful plot, and excellent character development with Jack's family. Your creativity is appreciated.

This is beautiful.. But my smutty brain is ! You have to write that epilogue, please, please purrty! These Phracking babies!

Fantastic ending to a very enjoyable fic. :)
Can't wait to reading more about Ella, someone I think Phryne will definitely identify with.
I would love to read an inappropriate & smutty epilogue. Why not? In fact I look forward to it! :)

Lovely story. You are awesome. An epilogue would be nice. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

Wonderful and awesome! Now, looking forward to that smut epilogue, please! Thank you!