Really awesome story, read in one go,please write more

Of course Yoda would throw the first insult

The grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors are adding up and are getting quite annoying.

it seems very little fanfic authors know how to write a true crossover. you all seem to OP the genre you favor. in this case you favor starwars. if you favored hp universe, then magic would be more powerful then the force. if you researched both, you would find magic can do far more than the force can do. thats why jedi and sith need lightsabers and magicals dont.
the best way to write a proper crossover, is to try to balance the power(s) and skills from each.

I would like to point out that female sith offer still called lord not lady. Being called lord is a title like how female Jedi masters aren't called Jedi mistresses. So it kind of bothers me hearing female sith be caked lady...

Great story

FCK you

I will never, ever understand this nigh obsession in HP fanfics where people change his name to Hadrian. Like, why change his name? And to one so ridiculous. Is it supposed to make him seem more mature? Regal? It's like taking Aragorn and suddenly calling him Aaron.

Man, I hate having to drop such a well written and interesting story... I mean this entire post is pointless tbh since who cares about some complaining random, but I just wish people would stop changing Harry's name... Just ruins it.

Yaddle is a woman, how could a PASIFIST planet take out a 5th of the fleet? if you're going to say the Republic did alot of damage and destroyed alot of ships you need to show it otherwise it makes no sense and sounds like a plot excuse rather than actual reason, so Greengrass is planning to betray Hadrian why? and does he know? i imagine someone like Hadrian who's familybetrayed him and who's grandmothers friends betrayed her he would assume everyone was plotting against him and would be watching them,

so how did Hardian get put into the Tournament? i doubt he wrote his name before he ran and his blood was with his Gran, did someone get it? how? and how and when did his gran die?

In my personal opinion, authors with low IQ shouldn't try to write complex plots as they usually end up like this story which is so filled with plot holes that it seems like swiss cheese.
This story seemed so much simple until you decided to add magical marriage contracts and binding contracts.
If the goblet of fire was truly so powerful then why the fuck didn't anyone simply put Voldemort's name in it.
This story is only becoming worse with each chapter.

For someone who is supposed to be so powerful and cunning, Harry truly has no control over his mouth and continues to throw temper tantrum whenever things doesn't go his way instead of remaining calm. Such aspects in this story really breaks the immersion.
The author really need some more experience before he could write a decent story.

you really evil fucker!

that wonderful story, Fuck you!, you must complete, Fuck you!, It was a shame to give it up, Fuck you!

At first I enjoyed the story but I just can't stomach where you turned it. I was already questioning Hadrians many dumb decisions but now you neutered him as well.

Two years later, still waiting for an update.