Reviews for The Unfinished
coconutwastaken chapter 30 . 7/30
Sorry to hear that dude.
Jack Redhawke chapter 30 . 7/28
Find Your favorite photo of him and set as phone background, remember the Goodest boi at his best, every chance you get, if he was old then he lived a full, happy life. I imagine his only regret was that he couldnt get more head pats.
themegaman chapter 30 . 7/28
I'm sorry for your loss, sounds like he lived a good long life.
HonoredBibliophile chapter 30 . 7/28
We are here
You are not alone
Hashirama 1710 chapter 29 . 5/27
wow I really want to see how this will end
blaiseingfire chapter 29 . 5/1
Ooooo, this was a nice little drama.
noble4259 chapter 26 . 5/1
Another amazing concept. My question though is this version of RWBY set in the same world of RWBY or is it different? What are the exact implications of a soul-partner? Is it similar to a meister and weapon in soul eater? A lot of questions I know but I genuinely think this story prompt is awesome.
noble4259 chapter 28 . 5/1
I think this would be a great story to make. Maybe one day I'll message you to make it.
Gh0stSpartan chapter 29 . 5/1
Interesting chapter, this would make an interesting story.
Heku03 chapter 28 . 4/7
Lit
FrostyChops chapter 3 . 8/27/2019
Oooo this seems like a good one! Would love to see it fleshed out further :D
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 29 . 8/13/2019
Good to hear from you. It has been years since your last chapter. But dude. Stop pushing yourself down.

It is good stuff and it is fun to read this chapter after you go back to chapter 3 but amigo. Things have really changed around to here. And not for the better.

I like this little bit. Keep this up.
Saluut.
death'sgodson1224-DGS chapter 28 . 7/30/2019
That's so sweet, that would be a nice prompt for someone to explore.
blaiseingfire chapter 28 . 7/30/2019
Dawww, this is really sweet.
Kerlongsj Evert Orlejov chapter 28 . 7/30/2019
Funny on how you went on those Red Strings of Fate. He found out what happened and how they afflict the persons between them. That was just funny.

You certainly did one funny job on this job and I hope to read more from you soon.
Saluut.
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