Very good:o that was just so cute:D

Hi. Love this story; it's intimacy is beautiful. However, you need a good beta to help correct a couple of mistakes. I also question the use of "treason" on Gallifrey. Either you need to write a little more about why that would be or change the word. As it stands, it makes little sense.
Keep writing, though;you're very good with plot development. :)
Eryn

It's hard to believe you've just started watching DW. This is a very beautiful story of Nine's and Roses' relationship. I hope you will enjoy Ten and Rose and write the story of how Nine's love for Rose just continued to grow.