Reviews for REWRITE: Playing Major
Roleplaying.queen chapter 5 . 4/24
please update soon
Roxhall1 chapter 4 . 11/26/2019
please update soon
maggie01 chapter 5 . 7/18/2019
M dear LacieKat you are strong and brave, i know what it is to lose a brother , a car accdent, you didnt stay in your state you move around you didnt stop living . That is strong , your a good person the proof you want to help kids with disabilities if its not generous and kind of you i dont know what it is. Dont stop writing because your excellent take your time but come back to us.

Maggie xx
Cake Woman chapter 5 . 12/13/2018
I am so excited to read more! I am curious of Bella's demon though. 3 Be safe
Peacelovefairy chapter 3 . 12/1/2018
Wow simply wow
kathleen.kelleyhendrickson chapter 4 . 10/23/2017
Glad your back...sorry for your loss...it is hard but out loved ones that pass ARE ALWAYS WITH US...I know, I loss my 7 year old September 23, 1993...I still feel him with me...

As for names...how about Jackson and Hailey?
i love new storys chapter 4 . 9/24/2017
lovely chapter hope you update soon again
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 4 . 9/6/2017
Such a unique way to bring Didyme back to life and I can't help how sad I feel for Marcus' painful wait. I hope you allow Bella to help him by encouraging him to restore her garden, regain his strength and sharpen his mind and help him bond with Bella who could share who Didy is today .

Twins and WOW! I'm ecstatic Jasper is so happy! You asked for name suggestions so here goes:
Hunter Brock and Angel Lee. Three of three of these names
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 2 . 9/5/2017
It's another intriguing chapter. I hope Alice and Edward piss off Bella enough she takes their heads, puts them iin separate boxes and buries them.

I'm sad Bell is unhappy being mated to Jasper!
Green Eyed Lana Lee chapter 1 . 9/5/2017
I loved how you began this story! I'm happy, happy Esme ripped the evil twins to pieces! I'm a llitle sad they put them back together so soon!
jeoliverio chapter 4 . 8/22/2017
This is good
dolphinmama06 chapter 4 . 8/21/2017
I am finding your story very interesting and I would be very happy if you like the names I suggest. For the girl Savannah Marie and for the boy Andrew Micheal good luck with choosing a name for each.
silversimon chapter 4 . 8/18/2017
Phoebe and Phillipe. Justine and Justin.
Greatie231 chapter 1 . 8/14/2017
Please update regularly, one of my fav jasper and bells pairing : they have kiddos ! Names ; Nathaniel , Katrina. Xxxx
traceybuie chapter 4 . 8/13/2017
hmmmm... I like your story and writing so I'm hanging with you. But normally the first sign of hybrid babies in a story and I bail.
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