i love you story. just one suggestion . you briefly mentioned the White House. NCIS is a civilian agency under the supervision of Department of Defense (DOD). so it wouldn't just be the president or his National security Advisor. it would also be The Secretary of Defense and Navy. (SecDef/SevcNav).Also The Joint Chiefs of Staff (JCS) and Various other Agency and Department heads.

Please write more I can't wait for it this story is now one of my all-time favorite for the Pyramid of angst and if it can go wrong it definitely will and I miss having stories that are like that keep me on my toes and make me question what's going to go wrong and how badly is it going to go wrong I can't wait for next chapter. I love this and I'm sad that I got to the end for the time being keep up the good work.

I hope you have danny just be done with it and go all out on vlad.
Vlad may have experience, but so does danny. I just want danny to stop holding back.
Danny could leak another news agency that the one that reported danny was in ncis holds no regards to murdered military.
Hope to see longer chapters. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I guess it depends were you are at. Im from california, and everon i know calls it soda. But my family in colorado calls it pop. So maybe a regional thing

I am proud that Danny is inventing new ghost tech instead of just recreating his parents inventions, it shows what the show barely grasped at if you read between the lines. A C average student cannot maintain a C average grade while missing as much class as Danny did. unless they are able to grasp and understand concepts quickly. I truly believe that Danny is a genius in his own right, just a bit of an idiot with social cues, just like his Dad.

great story though i did notice one thing that I can look past but feel I should mention. I am pretty sure that once a soldier retires from the military they become a civilian and no longer part of NCIS jurisdiction

I love your writing

I love your writing so much, this story is just really good 3

Damn Danny needs a break

Ah no not Spectra !

I love Danny being snarky as hell

Next update. Want ch.21. Plezze continue. "crowd chanting 'UPDATE 'UPDATE 'UPDATE 'UPDATE'."" plezze update soon

pleazzz continue. pleazzze update.

Great story, I've really enjoyed it so far. I'm excited for the next update!

ayyy keep up the good work. its a really well written fic and i cant wait to see what the end is like!