I liked this little story. It was well written and left me with a pleasant feeling that everyone has a chance to spin a bit of yarn about the Goblin King, whether it is about Jareth and Sarah or not. Awesome job as a first story! Congrats!

Oh that was so very sweet. I might have even got the feels a little(or maybe a lot) ;) Thank you. I hope the others see it too!

That is charming. And a lovely tribute to both DB and our King. Thank you for writing.