I love this story so much omg and I’m really investing myself in the noa and the nagisa ship

I have to admit, I didn't expect that I would get really invested in this story. Apart from some minor errors in grammars and typos, it's well written and the errors didn't disrupt the flow of the story.
This chapter seems ominous though, with Lizzie's reply.

And I'm also placing my heart on the Nagisa & Nao ship huhuhu

Can’t wait for the next chapter! I have found your story and binge on it. I’m quite enjoy the story of girl’s team of karasuno.

Awww I’m glad you liked my review! I hope you don’t feel discouraged or down because of the matching endings. I feel very invested in Noa’s and the rest of the girls journey and would really love to see it through. It makes sense considering how much Noa’s and Hinata’s compare and contrast as main protagonists. At first glance they seem pretty similar, but they do have some key differences. Hinata is fearless and fiery on the court, but lacks in experience and in the technical aspect. Noa anxieties and confidence constantly hold her back, but is someone that has already been on an international level of competition and was in her way to becoming a pro athlete. They foil each other nicely in that Hinata’s obstacles are mostly physical, while Noa’s are mental. Things are going a little too smooth for her now so I think I could see you shaking it up a bit for her in the future (I’m calling it now it has something to do with her mom give Noa all the toxic mother-daughter drama).

Now on to the actual chapter review because whew the drama! The girls team, much like the boys, are fighting tooth and nail for redemption and a chance to shine. Everybody is clearly making an effort to grow stronger not just as individuals, but as a team. Noa’s frustrations of being left out are understandable, but she needs to understand that her isn’t just as a regular player but a secret weapon.

It’s nice to see that her time at the Ushijima ft Tendou and sometimes Semi bootcamp is paying off. It actually reminds me of this documentary I watched on this female athlete where her trainer said that if she could train with guys she can most definitely dominate with the girls. Kuroo the ultimate provoker is actually giving her a fair warning, her serve is most definitely going to turn heads at nationals and she should be ready.

Oh no poor Mayu :( She definitely did NOT deserve to be outed in that way especially by someone she thought she could trust and understand. I really hopes she’s going to be okay and feel accepted by the team. They need to all get their act together since trouble in the form of Itachiyama is near...

Lovely chapter and wonderful storytelling as always, will continue to wait patiently for the next update. Happy writing!

In this chapter i thought its very good. I Like how you put the effort to right all of at and how you put the nice details in those paragraphs and dialouge.

This a lovely story with interesting characters and a dynamic plot, it keeps me guessing and anticipating when the next chapters are coming! I can’t wait for the nationals arc, though I don’t want to get ahead of myself. If the girls are going to be mixed up with the boys will we be getting Fukurōdani interactions ?

Ps have you read the recent chapters and what are your thoughts?（ω）

Why do so many female OCs in sports fanfiction have injuries?

Yo, haikyuu chapterr 369 definitely took me to Suplex City. I was shocked by the end... And so sad and excited...

At of all of the oc haikyuu stories this one stands out the most. Most of them are oc takes Yachi’s place and becomes manager but more sassy etc. I like how she really feels like her own character, she’s friends and talks a lot with the boys but she also has friendships and goals and aspirations outside of them and that’s really cool. Also Nao feels really well rounded and well written, she has flaws and makes mistakes, of which she gets called out on, but she’s also easy to root for and you want to see her succeed. All of the ocs really enhance the story instead of detract. Now on to the romance part! I like that it’s not a love story and not something that happens overnight. Most people by now would’ve really made it obvious who she’s going to end up with but this story really keeps me guessing. With Asashi I feel like that ship could’ve already sailed and maybe Noa really just wants to be his friend. And that’s actually really realistic she’s a 15 year old girl and feelings change a lot when you’re that age. The “date” was really cute even though it was almost ruined by Tanaka and Nishinoya I’m glad she’s getting a break and I think Nagasi is really cute for trying to get some time alone with her, even if it was trying to “study”. Ushijima as kind like this mentor is nice he made me laugh when he was like you suck at volleyball but don’t suck at beach volleyball which is his way of saying you’re really good lol. Who knows maybe his relationship with Noa could turn into something more ;). Her banter with Tsukishima is honestly really entertaining to me and I find their chemistry really good, so far they’ve brought out some of the worst in each other but I think they have the possibility to bring out the best. I think out of all of Noa’s boys I would like her to end up with tsukishima, at least see them develop some type of friendship. Sorry English isn’t my first language which is why I haven’t reviewed before. Great story hope to see how everything turns out and happy writing :)

PlEaSe cOnTiNuE TT

Nagisa's a cool guy but I can't help but ship her with Asahi.
This is pretty well written, you're grammar is a little off but it's getting there so good job!

Beautiful writing, thank u for a wonderful chapter. i ship nagisa and noa now lol

i should say you are doing a very good job. no tired troupe of foreign girl becames karasuno boys bolleyball club manager/healer/clown or whatever, and no romance involving karasuno members. in fact, it was almost like the girl does not revolved fully around the boys, whuch are truely great! it's a refreshing air. the way you write is so real, and very rough but at the same time delicate? i cant even place my fingers against your writing, it's too bizzarely good lmao.

but while i am enjoying this rollercoaster of emotion, i should say that alas, im done reading this fanfic. will came back in the future, maybe, since this fic has so much potential. until then!

lol! Loved it!

gah! I hope that you will write some more soon cause I really want to know what's wrong with Jiro!