I like it, very good job ! I hope its not dead through...

Here's a fucking idea: stop begging for reviews!.

next chapter please i want to see the yang vs ruby fight

Please update

You know in this story ruby and emerald in a lot ways are foils and flipside of coin of each other ruby is faunus assassin emerald is human thief also the way the way two interact with is also two differing emerald sees cinder as mother figure ruby is a lot more casual as well seems to still care about her birth mom summer rose shedding a single tear and holding bank so many more when finding summer's grave.

Cinder more likes that ruby is more aloof and casual especially comparison to emerald ruby is loyal but isn't looking for mother figure like emerald alice I didn't know how she feels about rest of her family but she still cares about her mother summer rose she did find and visit her grave and shred a tear.

D': 2016

"I have nothing more to say." Appropriate, I suppose, if likely unintentional.

I do love a good dark/evil Ruby fic, and I couldn't spot any noticeable flaws. I do hope that this and your other RWBY fics are continued at some point.

So, are these updates, like biannual?

I really like how this is going, when are you going to update next chapter?

Can't wait for a possible update

MORE PLEASE!

I can't wait for the the rewrite. I would ask that you avoid spoiling the ending in the authors notes. Wondering how the main character will turn out is the best part of these stories

I'm glad to hear you're going to update again! I'm sad to hear that you're going through a rough patch, just know that if you keep fighting through, you will come out a stronger person.
Keep writing!

Loving this idea! I hope things get better for you! Rwby fanfics don't seem to get as many reviews (sigh) but I still hope you continue to write! It's amazing so far and I'd absolutely love to see more!