Reviews for Unexpected Competition
Alejandra Davi chapter 14 . 7/16
Hello there!
another handsome and hot guy for uor lovely Kyoko, wow!, thats a new story
I thought I started to read it the first chapter a long ago, but in that time ony chapter one or two so I decided not to follow, but now I cant wait for the next chapter.
I hope youre well, greetings from Argentina, I read you soon (I hope)
Guest chapter 14 . 3/24
Post please please post new chapter
Guest chapter 14 . 3/15
Please post and soon stop leaving me alone post new chapters please
dreamerkins chapter 14 . 4/8/2019
I'm glad Ren came out, and told her off. I love Yashiro as makoto. I hope he falls in love too. he's kinda a favorite...
H-Nala chapter 14 . 4/5/2019
haha veteran actress.
brennakai chapter 14 . 4/5/2019
wow drop a bom Ren your words addre asf sharp add ever. As im sure he used he 'gentle man' smile add he said it...
Paulagato chapter 14 . 4/5/2019
Excelente, así da gusto ...que Ren saque la voz por su amada Kyoko!
Guest chapter 13 . 4/5/2019
Can't for the next update so glad to see new chapters being post yay
Paulagato chapter 13 . 4/5/2019
Jajajaja pobre Ren ... morirá de celos! Debe confesarse...es un cobarde
Carlablonde chapter 13 . 4/5/2019
Ohh thank you for the charpter
H-Nala chapter 13 . 4/5/2019
So did Makoto make it to Kyoko before Ren or was Ren not around? Ren appears to be around if he saw the hug. or did he just get back in time to see the end?
Guest chapter 12 . 4/2/2019
So good can’t wait for new chapter post
brennakai chapter 12 . 3/24/2019
it does seem it will get interesting... fight scene huh...
dreamerkins chapter 1 . 3/23/2019
Oh my gosh, I'm so excited about this! what a great story idea! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Guest chapter 12 . 3/23/2019
I loved it so glad to see it I can hardly wait to see what's next excited
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