you know for a book that had around 15 thousand words it felt like I was reading this book for a lot longer then I actually was

Ah... A VictoryRose that won in the end. Wish the canon universe would've ended up more like this, but that is what this site is for. Gotta admit, at first I thought this was going to be a fic where Ruby died instead of Pyrrha. This one works out better than that would in the "happy ending" department though.
I normally don't spring for the shorter stories, but this one was a good one. You know what? I'm gonna follow this fic even though it's already finished, and there's not a god damn thing you can do about it! MWAHAHAHA!

The talk pyrrha had with Dr. Vert reminded me about the story "Staying afloat", which doesn't mean that this is bad. This is story is quite good despite it being so short.

A nice ending to it. Thanks for writing it :)

Yep, still good. A therapist was a novel idea, and a well-executed one at that. Good suggestion from her with regards to Ruby too, and I liked that you touched on the suicide attempt briefly. It's one of those things I think anyone that's been close shouldn't keep to themselves.

Therapists in Remnant is rare to read about. I can only think of two other stories at the top of my head that has them in it.

Nitpick of the day: Don't use only "noticed" whenever you describe an environment :-)

Man, this is great! I love how you handle Pyrrha's emotions and the apathy in particular, since she cares so little for herself. It's very authentic and you've written a convincing case for a Pyrrha with mental health issues. The guilt is spot on, as is her dependency on Ruby. After all, who wants thrir personal safety blanket to leave?

If I were to say something that could have been done better, it would be that Ren and Nora's absence in helping her cope feels a bit off. Could've easily been solved by including that they had to go out on missions. Her panic at times could've been elaborated upon too to drive the knife deeper in, but all in all it's nitpicking.

Good chapter! I'm in the mood for some angst and this delivers. you did a good job with exploring her emotions and justifying her mindset. Overall a fun read, and it's furthermore interesting to see a story that was written during volume 3

The X-Files theme song played in my head when Pyrrha said we are not alone.

This was a great story with a lot of drama in it. I was worried for a bit that it would be discontinued because of the long hiatus but I am more than satisfied with how it ended. We all really enjoy your work, keep it up Noble. Tell the Legion I said hi.

Loved this story and love this pairing

1) Awesome fic! Tragedies make amazing fics, and tragedies with happy endings make amazebuns fics!
2) Did it take me that long to realize chapter titles were Breaking Benjamin songs? *facedesks* ahahaha

Yay happy ending! Wonderful story!

I sense a Breaking Benjamin fan. Was a nice ending to the story. Would have personally liked to have seen a little more build up for their relationship, (cus' I'm a sucker for the slow burn romances) but I think it was just the right amount to cap off the story. A great read.

Nice work. The shift from crushing sadness to a happy ending was enjoyable.

Shoutout to giving your fiance a shoutout in a story about mentally broken chick who is visiting what in my opinion are the scariest people on Earth just to find out she's in love with a chick who is hyperactive and loves cookies almost as much as I love writing overly complicated and completely pointless reviews/comments. (To anyone who actually understands the cluster fuck I just wrote send help.)