Interesting storyline, it would be fun to see where this would go

Aww continue please

Loved it!

please write some more. it's good.

please continue

I'm a bit curious as to where you'd take this.

What will happen when he run into past Ace?

Is this story dead? Hope not, please update soon!

shit. I love this story, please hurry with the next chapter.

I teared up, dude...

Nice story. St which point in time does it play?

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Your writing style is simply amazing.
The illusion in my head from your descriptions are so vivid and detailed.
What was coby's devil fruit?

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww Luffffyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy...

Ahem.

This is a pretty interesting fic, if REALLY SAD. I hope he gets his crew back together again, but I'm worried about his dream. Does he still want to be the Pirate King? After it causing the death of his crew? Have fun sorting that one out.

I really liked your story, the whole time traveling bit is fun. I like that Luffy came to the past with his older body although does that mean he replaced that time's Luffy? You timed Luffy's arrival before Ace joins the Whitebeard pirates but you don't really go in depth on what time Luffy is in. I assume that he is at least 3 years earlier from when he set sail from his home island. To sum it up, it'd be nice if you clearly told the readers what time Luffy is in.
I hope you add some dimension to Thatch. Like I don't understand why the fandom has him out as a prankster goof ball. ( Did I miss something? he seemed like a respectable friendly adult from the flashback we saw. If anything Marco seemed a bit more playful with Ace. ) I can not wait to read how it turns out.
Thank you for writing and sharing your lovely story.

So glad you've decided to continue this story, I look forward to seeing where you take it :)