Reviews for Hot and Heavy
smoon4409 chapter 5 . 9h
Loved the story, it was great! Really loved the ending!
Guest chapter 5 . 9/10
Re reading this drabble
caro chapter 5 . 4/4
ya una relacion muy adulta, pero estuvieron genial
Guest chapter 5 . 9/12/2019
Short but one of the best sex stories.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2019
So f*ckin' good! Great job!
IanBuddy chapter 5 . 5/5/2019
All I have to say is WOW! Loved it. Keep up the good work.
V-chan:)
AngelPanda0411 chapter 1 . 2/2/2019
Honestly...your stories are absolutely amazing and I love them so much. They’re passionate and wonderful and the chronicles are perfect. Like wow.
Lori Baker chapter 2 . 12/24/2018
I like there to be a story with lemons but a little more story would be good.
NikkiBC chapter 5 . 12/5/2018
That was equal parts hot and sweet!

I'm so glad they were able to FINALLY say "I love you"! And I know it has been said that the Chronicles series is a sort of prequel, but are you going to keep going in a sort of order, until the big I Love You? Or will everyone just write their ideas at whatever point they are at? Which eventually would bring it up to date and maybe go into a sort of sequel?

Also when I put in the link with the numbers to join your group, (as I joined the FB group before I finished this chapter), all it gave me was India Porn and sites on Marijuana! Lol I ended up taking a chance and searching via your name and came up lucky! To see at the end here you did say it was your name! I am very excited to get to know you fine fine ladies (and any gents!)! I live a very isolated life of being a working single mom to a teen! And since her father is basically just the "sperm donor" I work 70 hours a week ... very tiring! But at least I have this site and anime I can bond with my daughter over ... that and our taste in music!

I use to write stories with our fave characters back when I was in high school, but the computer it was saved on crashed and I never was able to retrieve the stories... that was long before internet and an actual name for it ... lol I am OLD! But after i had my daughter I lost that creative streak ... so I very much enjoy reading all the stories on this site and a couple others!

I have thrown my back out and been up all night in agony, so I am off to start another story! I am going to finish yours before I move on to the next author that was suggested to me, I do believe it will be Beej88, (starting in alphabetical order since I have quite a few suggestions)!

Goodnight to all ... or Morning, Evening & Afternoon!
Krys7 chapter 5 . 12/3/2018
Love it! Glad I came to check it out but is it bad that I love the chronicles more? Lol i just love the little mini hook up dates they have. Lookong forward to holiday issues of the chronicles!
Pia Bartolini chapter 5 . 10/22/2018
I was a little skeptical at first, I admit, since I like my lemons with plenty of plot and buildup. But once this got going I really liked where you took it and brought it around! In the end it was nice to see them finally create a relationship verbally instead of just everything but commitment. Of course, their friends won’t be the least bit surprised, but that’s okay ;).
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 5 . 9/21/2018
I'm glad that Darien and Serena told each other about their feelings, this story was wonderful and the ending was lovely!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 4 . 9/21/2018
I'm glad Darien rescued Serena from that creep!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 3 . 9/21/2018
Darien is an idiot!
jessielee14 chapter 4 . 4/27/2018
Oooo I love this story! And love it has recent updates! Can’t wait for the next chapter, I hope you keep writing other fics :)
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