I. NEED. AN. UPDATE. RIGHT. THIS. INSTANT. please z

om omgmgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg wut will happenn?

Update

Your writing style hasn't changed, but you've definitely improved. This is really good, actually. Only thing I would day is make other characters more involved, and add details. Like you get a pretty good idea of what's going on, but is Piper's house huge compared to Jason's? Does he notice that silver chandelier on the ceiling? Does he notice that there is literally an entire BOOKSHELF of movies? Currently, they all about as observant as a brick wall. Make sure there are DETAILS. You want to live in this story, not just read it. Some of the characters (namely Annabeth, Percy) are a little out of character. Make sure they still have their personality! Amazing job over all! I really like this.

I love this series, it's one of my favorite Jasper fanfictions. PLEASE continue, can't wait for the next
-LovesUnicorns10 :)

Maybe you should add another love interest for one of the main characters (Piper or Jason). After they are dating already of course... Just to add something to it.

Geat story! Just read it today. PLEASE upsate soon!

Great story! I can’t wait to see what will happen. Also, maybe some other ships too?
Keep on writing!

great job! excited to see you back!

update from 2018

I really want you to update your story because this is just too good to stop

Please update! I love this story! :)

Hey! This story is coming along nicely! Good job! I can't wait for the update! I couldn't help but notice the last time you updated was August 12... Are you stuck for ideas? I'm lazy and didn't sign in but thats happening to me on some of my stories (and I'm kinda of being lazy). Here's some plot ideas
-Epic volleyball battle between the two schools
-Piper and the volleyball team go up against their school rivals the Romans. Threats are sent to the Piper and the team (btw what's the teams name?), terrifying some of them, in the end the whole team shows up.
-The Schools recall what made the two schools enemies in the first place, perhaps it can be reconciled
-PERCABETH! FRAZEL! JASPER! LARIA! FOREVER!
I can't wait to see what you come up with, I love this fanfiction,
Gummy bears and Jelly beans,
~Lia
( PS. I sent in a OC a while ago, Aria Jordan, love interest for Leo? But maybe she could be part of the crew, gradually. She just moved and has no friends. Think about it (;)

awe im sad you havent updated in so long because that means you probably discontinued the story. I hope you havent because I love it tho! Piper and Jason are so so cute together and I just love th awkwardness and the drama that will play out with this whole praetor things

Okay, even though this plot of your book is kinda cliche, I absolutely, positively love it. PLEASE continue!