11/10 would recamend

yeah, guys, this is obviously a troll lmao, why yall gettin' mad

I saw the description and I had to check if it was for real cause I can honestly say that I have never seen anything like this. To begin with, cut the dyslexia crap. Even if you are dyslexic it's no excuse, dyslexia doesn't manifest this way. And even if it is accepted as an excuse for the spelling, what's your excuse for the senseless plot? (Look up the meaning of plot before you continue) For god sake get off the computer and buy a dictionary. In the meantime let's hope that your story gets enough reports to be taken down.

.Fuck.

On, we can all agree this is most likely a person trying to get attention from being overly outrageous and ridiculous. I think we are being played by a person who wants a reaction whether it's good or bad. But since this isn't criminal except to poor fanfiction and grammar police across the globe dropping dead of a panic attack we can't do that much about it.

That grammar... Good Lord.

Writing is an art. If you are trying to make a joke it isn't funny or tolerated.
If you are seriously trying to write I suggest a little more work on the punctuation and grammar and spelling and everything.

My eyes burn reading this. I showed this entire "story" to my fourteen year old brother. What did he say?

"Who the fuck wrote this shit? A two year old?" And he started laughing. Go back to school and learn to spell properly you weeaboo

Ok, it's nite-nite time for you. Your parents should not let you use the computer without supervision. Also, if you really are a 13 year old kid, you need psychological help.

Dealing with Guest Review aka Trolls

On the Page you go to when you log in to fan-fiction netwhen you log on the Account Tagis expanded and you will be on your account Setting will be open in frount of you scroll down to

Account Options using the Yes and No function you can chose to Moderate Guest Reviews click on the Yes O it will turn blue

Enable moderation feature for story reviews from guest/non-members of the site. When enabled, you have a 36 hour window to moderate (approve or remove) new guest reviews before they are accepted by the site. When disabled, there is no waiting period and guest reviews are automatically accepted and displayed by the site. Note that you can always remove guest reviews post the 36 hour moderation window.

Next got to the Review Tag and click on it when it expands you will see a tag called Moderate Review click on it this will open you can now moderate your reviews and approve or remove them remember you must turn this feature on by going to the Account tag

Also under the Review Tag you will find a tag called Remove Reviews by click on this you will let you remove anonymous reviews

stop the trolls
To make a Report to fan-fiction net, go to the Help Tag (written in blue at the bottom of the page) click on it. Next click on the Email address which is to be found under the words Support Email (also written in blue) this will take you to your email account and you can then write an email which will go direct to the Fan-fiction net admin team this is a faster way of reporting abuse
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TROLL

What?! I'm sorry, but men can't get pregnant. Unless they're transgender, it's impossible. And Derek Morgan is most definitely NOT transgender.

I think it just got worse! WTF!?

NO. I freaking hate Edward. Your story is crappy! and I fear for the safety of everyone around you.

There might might be some quality to your work, but it is hard to see. If you like Criminal Minds, love Spencer Reid, and love writing more then you will find a more suitable place to post your stories. The more you write here the more you are open to hateful criticism. I don't like writing this and I believe that young writers deserve a chance to succeed. I want you to write on this site when you can spell "continued" correctly and don't use exclamations points so much. I don't like being harsh because I only aim to help you. Please don't get too upset as this comes from a place of concern and not hatred for you or your story.

Huh?. . .

Still posting new chapters?. . . Against my better judgement- Here, troll. Have some food. You look absolutely famished.