I know you've probably abandoned this, but I just want to let you know this such a good story. I love the way you adapted the characters for all their roles. If you ever get back into this story, I know there'll be a lot of people excited for it. :)

HOLY SHIT I CANT ITS SO AMAZING everything is perfect yona is so perfect I can't wait for more it's somperfect your writing incapsolates the 20s so well man it's so good

Wow... I mean... WOOOOW!
Really, really good writing, awesome plot, rythm and characters... breathtaking and intense.

I really cannot wait to read the next chapter... I am not a native English speaker and some slang is quite difficult but... your ff is worth of the effort, and more...

Thank you!

Wow. Just wow. Stumbled across this and absolutely had to binge it. It is certainly very different from the usual fics in the fandom, but I can't help but love the way the prose of the piece so perfectly places some kind of silky, deep voice narrating it in my head, and the way it can be nearly rambling but still feel like every aside, every metaphor or simile, every little comment has an important purpose. The story may be a slow burn, but it has a lot of action in its own right and it is just so interesting to try and guess at exactly what happened in each of the character's unique pasts before they are revealed. Definitely one of the most intriguing fics i have found in quite a while and i can't wait for more!

Can't wait for the next chapter

I know I havent left any reviews here so I just want you to know that I really really absolutely loved this to bits. It just makes my heart go wild because the plot, the characters, the narration and every single thing especially their characterization makes me so happy. You've written such a stunning story, it's so hard to believe this is just fanfiction. I just love this, hope you do well in life.

Worth the wait, definitely worth the wait.

Holy shit the story is my jam. Nice update.

I'm having a ball with this story. Love your narration style.

I really love the film noir-esque approach you took with this fic! This is hands down one of the most unique stories I've read on this site. Please keep up the good work!

Hello,
This story is so amazing, I just had to leave a review. Congratulations on writing such a creative and unique piece. I've never seen the usage of improper grammar used so darn effectively and I find this incredibly impressive. It gives your story the perfect touch and really brings to life the world and the setting. While I was reading it, I could so clearly see everything playing out in one of those shady, black and white mobster films. And the characters, even though they're in such a different world(one that never even crossed my mind they would be in), are still so true to themselves in so many ways. Love their conversations and interactions. I was captivated the entire time I was reading. Don't ever give up on this story. You must finish it :]

so glad you're back! But take how ever long you need to write! I can't wait to see what yona has in store! She is gonna kick ass

holyyy shitttt you're back! ! ! and with chappter five! yay! sorry im a little late reading this but oooooohhhh my gooooooodddd. yona is legit about to fucking tear shit up and i am SO ready for it.

I think my prayers were answered, because low and behold another chapter! Honestly, I can not tell you how amazing this story is. The premises, the characters, your voice/style, all of it kills me. I'm so impressed. At the end of the Red Roulette scene, I sat in awe for a good five minutes. You blew me away. The whole thing was such a Yona thing to do, I think that's why it was my favorite part.
Anyway, I love how we are beginning to aqquire some kind of background for the characters (I especially loved the small scene between Yona and Hak) and love how the story is progressing. Keep it up, but don't fret, you have an audience of people grateful to read your story!

Also, I would like to say how beautiful I find your style; the amount of descriptions balanced with the narrator's words and dialogue is done flawlessly. Bravo!

Thank you for such a great piece of literature

YAY AN UPDATE! Great chapter, I love the writing!