Reviews for The Demon's Bride
snickerdoodle45 chapter 1 . 6/9
I haven’t finished reading this book, but I quite enjoy it. I’ve been looking for a book where OC acts in a motherly way towards Ciel as many stories out there have him in competition with his butler over someone’s affections. I get that he’s a character favorite, but I’ve always seen him as a child so I can’t really imagine him trying to court a 16/17/18/19 year old OC.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/8
Yay! Found it again. My old phone went and wouldn't turn out and over been trying to find all the fanfics I had before as bookmarks to bookmark in this phone.

I miss this one very much. I'm glad it's still here.
micaylah chapter 16 . 5/18
ahhh finally ! loved this chapter,, esp with protective sebastian showing again
micaylah chapter 6 . 5/17
i love how much thought you’ve put into even the smallest things,,, esp the nicknamei’m enjoying this story so much !
Skylar Shinohara chapter 51 . 4/26
Marianne feels a bit like an unimportant side character in this...

While I do appreciate that you are following the storyline, I can’t help but feel that Marianne is just there for the fun of it and not there to make a difference at all. Would’ve been nice to see her do something out of the ordinary that differs a bit from the storyline for once.

Because as of now, she’s just trailing after Ciel like a lost puppy and isn’t affecting anything at all.
Skylar Shinohara chapter 43 . 4/25
Why didn’t Marianne prevent Ciel’s kidnapping though? She could have, couldn’t she? Really curious about this bit
Guest chapter 53 . 4/8
Hey can you let us know you’re still alive? It’s been over 2 years and with this coronavirus around the world. We won’t know who’s alive or not.
Crystal Dragon chapter 53 . 1/12
This is now one of my favorite stories! You can bet I'll be saving it and rereading it again in the future!
Crystal Dragon chapter 46 . 1/10
That spider is a pervert, but also what a way for Claude to find out about the seal on her back. Knowing Sebastian is a demon PRINCE you think he would be smart enough to tuck web and run, but arrogance I think was always his motivator
Crystal Dragon's chapter 32 . 1/10
I have been binge reading this. I love it. I can't wait to see what else this story has to offer. Wether you include the other demon or not. Thank you for writing a masterpiece
danielaine chapter 53 . 12/2/2019
Loved it! Had me in tears a couple of times too.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2019
Hey everyone its guest here and my friends played a prank on me by disabling my wattpad account temporarily. 5 - 6 of my friends share the same wattpad account and one of my friends reposted the story on our account with the author's permission so nobody worry!
Victoria Vessalius chapter 1 . 8/22/2019
Love it
Guest chapter 53 . 8/14/2019
Hey it’s been over an year since you finish the story. When’s the next one coming?
Phenylalanine chapter 53 . 4/18/2019
This story is my new favorite! Fucking hell imma read it again. The plot is all I ever wanted starting from the family relationships of Sebastian, Marianne, and Ciel then making Sebastian THE PRINCE OF HELL OMG IM SCREAMING! Although, I never really liked season 2, you made me love it especially the ending. Sebastian as Ciel's butler forever makes me mad like seriously, give the man-rather demon a break! This fic is a wish come true! I hope you made a sequel revolving in the life of those four (including baby Tristan) and Lucifer supporting them in the background ehehehe. Looking forward to a sequel...if there would be. I hope though, stories revolving Ciel being Sebastian's 'father' and him being royalty in hell like this one i Thank you author! Wonderful inspiration on Marianne's character.
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