When's the next chapter coming? I want to know what Blake and Yang with the others will do

Hey I like the changes to the story, well most of it except for Adam dumping Blake like that. But at least she has friends now :)
If Adam tries to get her back, Blake better be prepare to throw the choker in his face and tells him that they're done and won't follow him anymore. I did like them as a couple still, I just hope Adam realizes his mistake and loves Blake again before its too late

Hey its been a while, we got word from a friend about the changes for this story.

Rahzel - I can't believe that happened, poor Blake :(
I hope she can get stronger soon and make up for past actions. I'm glad Yang is there for her as a friend. I noticed in chapter 7 and now that Blake still has that choker on. She should just take it off and return it to Adam if they meet again, since they broke up like that and because of Adam's betrayal towards Blake's love for him. It would tell him that Blake doesn't want to stay with him anymore.

Ryu - You've improved on the writing and story, but there's still some mistakes. I still have yet to hear the other story, Adam's POV. Update when your ready, we'll wait for you.

Hey, it's been a while. I like the changes to the new NOL, I did wish u have kept the original just to see the alternate endings of both stories but I am curious to see where this will go.

In chapter 7 Adam gave Blake a laced choker as a present right? Is she still wearing it? I wonder what Adam was really thinking the entire time before and after he supposedly killed her... And yes I read the other updated chapters, nice work on it by the way :)

Can't wait to see chapter 9!

OH, MY GOD! I discovered this story searching tauradonna in Deviantart and I fell in love with it immediately! It's been ages since you updated but I'll look forward to it!

This is a GREAT story please continue

It's good to see them work together and have a peaceful vacation. Has it really been a year since they were together and Adam is training her?
And then Ligero comes out and says those things about himself, his ladies, Farrand and Adam. He's just saying that just so he can separate them and try to rape Blake right?
Adam, you better sort out your feelings, just say you love her! At least in the end of this chapter, it did confirmed that he does want her by his side. He wouldn't trade her off right?
We're going to read NOL Red Edition now. Promise you'll update more chapters soon for both NOL stories okay?

Rahzel - I know Adam wants to keep Blake safe but they are partners, she is able to take care of herself, most of the time. Adam knows that. And despite what happens they become sexually intimate again, which is a good thing, more lemons & smut. Adam takes her other virginity from behind. He has officially completely claimed her whole.

Ryu - I wander what Adam is really thinking? Does he really have 2 personalities or is there something else? When Adam answered Blake's question if he really loved her like she loved him, I think that Adam is struggling with his feelings and just needs time to sort them out before giving her a straight answer. I'm curious to know more about him in the story.

Rahzel-I'm glad that Adam didn't kill Blake, good thing it was just a dream. When did Blake fall asleep? Will we find out what really happened when we read the red version of NoL? Adam should know that Blake was a virgin when he took her and that she loves him! He does know right?

Ryu- Farrand would do anything to get Adam & Blake away from each other. He really must feel threatened that his position as Adam's right-hand man is being taken, that's what I think. But Farrand doesn't have to feel threatened, he could just work together with them. Is he jealous or something?

Rahzel-And another sexual scene happens, 2 in a row. I thought that Ligero was going to rape Blake, good thing he didn't. Adam & Blake end up making out again, they had sex to make up for their earlier awkwardness. Don't say it'll happen everything time they argue or something? Adam knows that Blake was a virgin before he popped her cherry right?

Ryu-So Ligero's semblance is revealed, and he has 2 lady friends like Adam had told Blake in the previous chapter. And why is Farrand trying to frame Blake? She's doing everything for Adam and the White Fang.

Rahzel-Aww~ don't end the sex scene there, show them go at it for round 2! Good thing Blake was a virgin but she's going to be sore tomorrow.

Ryu-Did Farrand faked being knocked out just so Blake can fend for herself? At least she handled herself better than him. So this Ligero was a friend of Adam's before he defected from the WF and now he sets his sights on destroying him by taking Blake, wanting to greatly annoy Adam. Is there an explanation for it later in the story? Actually don't that, I... we'll just continue reading.

So the smut is going to happen next chapter. Can't wait to see how it'll go as. Chapter 3!

Rahzel-Who changed Blake's outfit? Don't tell me it was Adam! Or was it a female WF member? It'd be interesting to see Adam 'coupling' Blake while wearing that violet sundress. And the way Adam & Blake were talking to each other, from business to private talk.

Ryu-Farrand doesn't seem to trust Blake, wander why. Adam & Farrand have different views on her, for different reasons, that much I can see.

KK-Belle wasn't kidding about this story, it's really amazing! Finally having a look in Blake's Ninjas of Love book, with Tauradonna as the main characters of the story. It's too bad that there aren't that many chapters, this story has a lot of potential, the Red Edition too! We'll look more into this, just please continue to update more chapters.

It's great that Adam & Blake are together and they have made progress thanks to Blake's efforts. Farrand should stop accusing Blake of everything or something really bad could happen to him and everyone.
If what Ligero said is true, I hope Adam doesn't dump Blake, I really want him to really want Blake as his lover and partner. It would be too sad if that was the case, which I'm hoping it isn't. Get well soon Blake...

It's been a while. So there are 2 sides of Adam, as Blake puts it. Adam loves and lust for Blake, that a good combination, al least that's what I think. Adam has taken her innocence in both sides, ass & pussy. He does know that Blake was a virgin until he took her right?