What an amazing story

This- THIS IS HILARIOUS AND CUTE

This was hilarious, well done!

Oh my god this was so amazing! The part when Nami called Usopp "Detective Usopp" and he'll have to sniff out crime just made me laugh so hard. You are like an awesome comedy writer and I hope to write comedy like yours one day. But seriously though this idea, real clever I feel like this would actualy happen in the anime. (well if they had any free-time, they're always running into danger lol).

Loved the few stories that I ve already read from you ! Hope you will continue because I really like your stories how you picture characters and the humour behind it. Of course the touch of Luna is so much better. Hope you will keep up the good work.

My favorite parts were the semen proof and the depiction of Zoro by Nami. That is all so perfectly in-character and exhibits Odaachi's witty humor. Absolutely brilliant oneshot. xD

OMG this is so funny XD LMAO! Those flashbacks just cracked me up haha! I think they're not OOC, great job and I hope to see more of your updates! Btw love the LuNa ending, that was really sweet...

This made my day XD ! One of my favourite One Piece fanfic! I really like the LuNa ending too, hope you will continue posting new stories

This is the funniest story I read so far! They're not OOC so great job! The part where they gave their own flashbacks were the most hilarious

this story made my day! Thank you! And I love the LuNa moment! Looking forward to your next update D

this is.. this story is.. just so much amusing and entertaining. I couldnt let my eyes slip a word on your story hahah. it is a very good story. i like it very much, plus you could describe all the shp crews smoothly

What is it? The truth of that statement, is it that Nami said how she felt? Or when she made in love with Luffy?

That was too funny. Poor Luffy. That was perfectly done I might add. I think you could do a sequel to that based on where you ended this. Sanji finds One of Luffy's shirts in Nami's room which she took to sleep in. Luffy and Nami's relationship is secret to all but Robin and while Luffy is innocent as it was Nami that took it, Nami can't have anyone knowing that so she has to make sure he's found guilty, with a nice couple of piece offerings at the end. Just a thought. Excellent work!

Nami is a real witch. But I really loved your story and it was funny. Still love Luffyxnami.

Lol so funny dude you are a master
Characters well heck perfectly portrayed
Humor on a scale of 1 to 10 I give you a 39 omg so fuuny I love this story you are such a wonderful eroter I read all of you one piece and some of dragon ball turly a master writer i love your work and plz write more