Oh wow, that‘s really great and so different! Loved it!

What a novel idea! One of the Muses of Legend actually falls in love with the writer he's been helping. He abdicates the immortal realm for the opportunity to live a human life with her. I hope it's worth it.
Judy

I enjoyed the concept of a mind reader being a muse and feeding the thoughts of a writer.

I really enjoyed this concept. It's unique and fun and your world building was interesting to explore. However, I think it suffered for being a one-shot. I know for the contest there were limits and so forth, but I think this story idea could really blossom into an incredible story if you took it back 10 years or so and started a full version of their journey. I know I'd be interested to read that!

Thank you!

I hope you write more to this story!
KEEP WRITING!️

That was one of the most original and wonderful stories I've ever read! I loved it! Please revisit these two in the future! Congratulations on your win ... It is most definitely well deserved.

Amazing story! The banter between them was exquisite. You had me laughing in so many places. Interesting plot. Would love to see where it could go.

Awesome

What a crazy situation, to meet the character in your book in the flesh! I suspected that this was the first time for Mace to actually make love. I also wanted to grab Bella and tell her to stop being so stubborn and prickly. But, that was the point, he finally got through her defenses and she finally surrendered to "loving and being loved". Thank you!

Thank you very much for participating in our contest! :-D

Born! I loved this unique take on the contest themes! I really enjoyed their banter, too. Beautifully written, as always! Thank you for entering the CPS Contest!

*hugs*

Becca

Wow wow wow I loved this one. I would LOVE to see this expanded upon :)

That was awesome to read I loved it a lot thank you

This had better be extended! If you didn't catch that I loooove this story. ;-) Good luck!