Reviews for Alternate Plans
Adventreader221 chapter 11 . 8/19
its been several months now, can yiu plz update
Domonic chapter 11 . 8/1
Hope you can get back into the swing of things, this was a really good story.
Kushmeister420 chapter 11 . 7/18
I really enjoyed reading this fic and I'm really curious how it's going to turn out now Naruto has remembered who he is. I hope you're doing well in life and didn't lose your motivation to write since it's been almost a year since you've been active at all. I'm looking forward towards the next chapter. Keep up the good work! Cheers!
FromTheUnknown chapter 3 . 7/11
Ancient sekirei blood... I'm done now. Peace, good luck with your writing..
FromTheUnknown chapter 2 . 7/11
So disappointed, how hard is it to find a story that doesnt do the canon "Moving into the in".
ChangeMe4574 chapter 9 . 4/23
“Uzumaki-Namikaze”, yeah don’t do that
ChangeMe4574 chapter 10 . 4/15
Man, that was a ride. An exhilarating, incredible ride.
The personalities and their interactions were awesome. Each character was well done. Not only that but Naruto actually realized that he wasn't treating his Sekirei properly (Their bond is practically a master-servant bond and demands proper responsibility)
The plot is finally moving too, though honestly, I was a bit too distracted by the excellent characters you kept introducing (especially Karasuba)
I can't wait to see what'll happen next. You've been absent for quite a while. Alas, a man can hope.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/1
This is a good story, not as cliche as most, with the exception of Tsukiumi being in the harem. Yes, I know you have Musubi in the harem, but Musubi being paired with Naruto in these crossovers is actually a lot more rare than him being paired with Tsukiumi, most writers seem to think Musubi HAS to be paired with Minato as a side character, just as they think Haruna HAS to be with Rito in To Love Ru, Rias Gremory HAS to be with Issei Hyoudou in High School DxD, Orihime HAS to be with Ichigo in Bleach, and Lucy Heartfilia HAS to be with Natsu in Fairy Tail... really people are so obsessed with keeping Naruto from pairing up with the main girls that pairing him up with the side-girls ends up being the cliche.

Loved the addition of an Otsutsuki antagonist and a background tying this into the Naruto world, very nicely done. I wonder though if when you resume this story, with the recent revelations of Boruto, if this Otsutsuki will be Isshiki?
Doctor G chapter 1 . 2/25
LLLIIIIIEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS! I DID NOT ASK FOR A STORY WITH MUSUBI! If anything, she should be replacing Akitsu or the other girl in the tag considering this. Even more so since Naruto is basically replacing the main character of Sekirei! Like wtf!? This is disappointing, and I almost never explode at fics or authors. If I wanted Musubi I would've *looked* for her! This is ridiculous. MADNESS I TELL YA! MAAAADDDNNEEESSSSSSS! Me thinks me need cheese to sate me bubbling rage! HehehhehaHAHAHAHAHHABYE!
Legalt chapter 4 . 2/26
First off, very nice story. Has been great so far and you write far better than the vast majority on here.

Second... Bipolar does NOT mean suddenly being happy then mad. it never has, never will. Those are mood swings. Borderline Personality Disorder. I say this because as someone who's been diagnosed with Bipolar 2 since a teen, people using it wrongly irks me so much. Bipolar involves phases. A manic phase where you're generally much more energetic to put it simply, and not having to be prone to anger at all (depends on the person), and a depressive phase which is obviously depression. Both can last weeks or months at a time before changing, and not just super abruptly.

Anyway, just figured it's something you should know... It's a misconception that's irritating for people that have it. You write, as I like to as well (haven't decided to post yet), so who cares if a few people get offended, but this is just a fact. Nothing wrong with fixing and learning something you didn't know before. Thanks
reptoholic chapter 11 . 12/13/2019
Hope you can get is resolved ! Keep up the amazing work!
reptoholic chapter 10 . 12/13/2019
shittttttt this is getting good
reptoholic chapter 9 . 12/13/2019
...wow
reptoholic chapter 8 . 12/13/2019
hot
reptoholic chapter 7 . 12/13/2019
ahahahahahahahhaaa
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