Reviews for Gumming The Works |
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Guest chapter 1 . 3/3 Oy |
Guest chapter 5 . 3/3 Y3 |
Guest chapter 6 . 2/22 H; |
Guest chapter 5 . 2/22 Uk |
josephleblanc75 chapter 6 . 11/3/2019 Like |
Guest chapter 3 . 4/21/2017 Good Nice |
naruto chapter 6 . 2/24/2017 great chapter keep it up |
rbrnch.dk chapter 6 . 9/13/2016 yes fuck yes |
Jacob.Uzumaki chapter 6 . 9/4/2016 I fucking love it i swear all of his vic and Timmy story's are the shit 10/10 |
x-mariaa chapter 5 . 6/25/2016 Also, it just occurred to me after I posted my first review, but... Vicky better pull out the Plan B because he just, um... you know... ...inside of her... so, yeah. This could go from hot lemons to Secret Life of the American Teenager faster than they can say, "oops!" |
x-mariaa chapter 6 . 6/25/2016 I loved this story. Really, everything about this one was just perfect. It wasn't a wise idea to read this in public; however, because everybody around me was staring at me as if I were a mad woman because of the way that I was grinning. I couldn't help it; the lemons got that reaction out of me, haha. One of my favorite points in this story definitely had to be Timmy's innocence. It was as cute as it was endearing. Perhaps I'm a sicko, but I liked the idea of her corrupting him, in a way. I also tip my virtual hat to you for keeping everybody in character, Wanda's disporoval standing out to me the most. It was nice to see her act true to her responsible nature, rather than approve of what many would consider a not-entirely-morally correct relationship on the spot. On alot of the other stories for this ship on this site, Vicky is also depicted as some sort of sex-crazed nymphomaniac. It was very much like a fresh breathe of air to not see this go that way. Both of their inexperience, Timmy's ignorance and wariness towards the subject, along Vicky's advances and foward nature brewed together to create a funny, cute, sometimes embarrassing, and all around steamy story. If you ever decide to add another chapter, I'd love to see it.! |
BlindMaster chapter 6 . 5/31/2016 that good ending - I want a continuation to see how their relationship evolves, insurance will have consequences later We then see - thanks for the fic |
BlindMaster chapter 5 . 5/31/2016 crazy - her mother appeared in the best part - all excellent forms chapter |
BlindMaster chapter 4 . 5/31/2016 its a freakin hot! the temperature rises the temperature rises the temperature rises |
BlindMaster chapter 3 . 5/31/2016 hohoh the best birthday - love this history the best couple! |