Reviews for Harry's time in Las Vegas |
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Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2019 Please update |
EdTheBeast chapter 1 . 10/8/2019 This is a very interesting start of a story! |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2019 Please update soon |
PGHammer chapter 1 . 5/8/2019 Yes - I noticed the pair of Lady Slytherins - however, I doubt that anyone in Slytherin House would *dare* pick a bone with either - especially if they work as a team. First - Jennifer Walters nee Slytherin - her current green skin means she is *stuck* that way - which has happened twice (once during a stint with the Fantastic Four); however, Harry would no more care than the Fantastic Four did. The other is Wanda Slytherin nee Maximoff - the Scarlet Witch. Used to be married to the Vision - the only reason she isn't is that the Vision is dead (Infinity War) - however, she did help collect the tab from Thanos for that (Avengers: Endgame). |
PGHammer chapter 1 . 2/15/2019 Lots of places to shop for clothing on the Strip - from tailored to everyday. (Everyday clothing? On the Strip? Yes - not every day is fancy-Dandy - in two trips, I dressed up a grand total of once - and that was for dinner. I went casual for all other meals - and especially breakfast and lunch; the only dressy dinner was the Sunday of my first trip to Vegas.) Everyday on the Strip usually means two locations on the Strip - the largest is next to the MGM Grand (and across from NewYorkNewYork). If the "Waifu" reference due to Maxima's height differential over Harry? If anything, Power Girl has an even larger height differential (she is six-foot-six, compared to MY six feet even - in other words, she is even taller than Maxima -or me, for that matter; the only women in the DC universe taller than Power Girl are Barda Free and Giganta). |
PGHammer chapter 1 . 1/14/2019 Lots of places to shop for clothing on the Strip - from tailored to everyday. (Everyday clothing? On the Strip? Yes - not every day is fancy-Dandy - in two trips, I dressed up a grand total of once - and that was for dinner. I went casual for all other meals - and especially breakfast and lunch; the only dressy dinner was the Sunday of my first trip to Vegas.) Everyday on the Strip usually means two locations on the Strip - the largest is next to the MGM Grand (and across from NewYorkNewYork). |
PGHammer chapter 1 . 8/6/2017 Good on Remus - his werewolf compliments the were-cheetah that is Cheetah to a T; if nothing else, Munroe can play taser. |
Bronze chapter 1 . 6/21/2017 This is good. The only thing I'd change is I'd add Kitty to Harry's little harem. I'd consider doing the same with X-23 but don't really know enough about her. I do hope to read more of this. |
PGHammer chapter 1 . 9/13/2016 X-23 is a female clone of James Howlett AKA the Original Wolverine. Cheetah and Harley Quinn are both former members of the Society (DC Comics universe). Shadowcat used to have the code-name Jubilee (her real name is Jubilation Lee) - like Storm (Ororo Munroe), she is a member of the X-Men (two years younger than Rogue, in fact; thus the youngest member that was NEVER one of the New Mutants). Maxima (DC comics universe) at one point tried to woo Superman; she is also Starfire's sister (DC comics universe; originally Teen Titans, now Justice League). the Captain Marvel in this story is indeed the Marvel Comics version - and is properly female; it's also AFTER her recovery from her encounter with a young Rogue (the Bridge Brawl). |
WhiteElfElder chapter 1 . 8/11/2016 I think She-Hulk will break Harry. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/23/2016 LOL KEEP THIS GOINHG |
firebluebird2006 chapter 1 . 4/10/2016 um pretty sure some of these are marvel superheroes. |
Caelus06 chapter 1 . 3/9/2016 Cool |
edboy4926 chapter 1 . 2/15/2016 Good intro. |
Sean Malloy-1 chapter 1 . 2/15/2016 Nice idea, you seem to be mix-and-matching different versions of characters. Also, flashbacks might be a good idea |