Reviews for Never Give Up |
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![]() ![]() ![]() 'Not for fans of Dolores Umbridge' Umbitche well NEVER have fans. I mean, she's more hateable than Voldy. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How was Umbridge able to move let alone attack after Harry broke every bone in her body? "He disarmed her and broken every bone in her body in the process".Fun story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great work on this |
![]() ![]() ![]() But HOW did he do it? How did Voldiemorty take it? What kind of things would other foul villains say to him? I can see a scene where they mock him for being so childish and stupid, how THEIR plans to take over the world was so much better...forgetting where they are and howthey got there... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautifully crafted! Loved it. Thanks so much |
![]() ![]() ![]() Curious how my devious mind went directly to classes are more than three people at a time, no more classes. Surprisingly Dolores didn't pick up on the toad society. Is Harry going to involve the Weasley twins or continue to use backfiring logic on the Umbitch? Great story LOL |
![]() ![]() There are umbridge fans ? |
![]() ![]() amusant! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Holy shit! Where are you when "Umbitch Boot Camp" happen in canon, sassy!Harry?! I think I'm in love with this version of Harry! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story; I really enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing story. Have you written a story about how Harry and Kara got together in this story? If not I think you should I would love to read it. Keep up the great work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved this story. Well thought out. Great to see Delores out of Hogwarts. |
![]() ![]() The end of the chapter makes me wonder how the magical world is still in one piece. LMAO |
![]() ![]() ![]() yah ok. cuz I was wondering if u were ever going to straight out say her name. its a megamatt story, we all knew |