Yup, definitely cannot resist the temptation of reading yet again one of your Vocaloid works. I just cant. Also! Interesting change of style, fun to read Kaito's thoughts at the particular last part of the scene, especially how simply he wanting to just kiss her. Great job and keep it up, yo

This was a nice change of pace for your story. How you write a story has been improved thanks to this one. Repetition has been decreased, and more details about the scene is made. Nice one.

Sweet

I like it.