Reviews for A moment of enlightenment |
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creativesm75 chapter 4 . 6/22/2017 very good |
Johnny Spectre chapter 4 . 3/21/2017 needs a hearty helping of more, don't you think? |
Spangle Jenks chapter 2 . 2/26/2016 Really interesting turn of events...really didn't see it coming lol. But its got me hooked on how the others will react to seeing Jaune again so i eagerly await the next update |
Masseffect-TxS chapter 4 . 2/26/2016 Kind of like Deathstroke's healing factor that takes a time to heal his body? Cool, in response to Chapter 3 |
garoorar chapter 4 . 2/26/2016 Whoever the mortician, or doctor is who declared Jaune dead should be fired. How the hell does someone misdiagnose death?! |
FlameSparks7 chapter 4 . 2/26/2016 Enjoying the story. Wonder how you will explain Jaunes lack of Knowledge considering his family has powerful Semblances? |
Guest chapter 3 . 2/22/2016 Lol this took off the edge from the finale. Gj |
pankaka chapter 3 . 2/21/2016 poor guards. :3 But great story and idea. i like them. continue with your works. |
ChimaTigon chapter 3 . 2/20/2016 I can't wait to see the other's reactions! Their going to be like, "WHAT THE HELL?" |
Masseffect-TxS chapter 3 . 2/20/2016 This is great, will that next chapter have the rest of the gang like the rest of JNPR, RWBY, CFVY Qrow, Taiyang and some of the teachers visiting them and they hear the noise of their 'love making' it would make for a hilarious situation. |
JMK2 chapter 3 . 2/20/2016 Looking forward to him meeting the rest of his team as well as team RWBY or what's left of it depending on how you write this. |
guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2016 like it hope you continue |
Darkkseid chapter 3 . 2/20/2016 Loving this so far |
The American Wolf chapter 3 . 2/20/2016 Arkos smut never enough |
PthaloBlueHawk chapter 2 . 2/20/2016 Wow whole month comatose. Gotta admit I haven't read something like this before, I hope you keep it up |