Reviews for Labour |
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Debate4life chapter 7 . 11/12/2017 Wow, that was quite a chapter! Very much enjoying such an unique spin off. |
RotWS chapter 7 . 3/19/2017 This is why Armsmaster and Kid Win put tracking devices and teleportation mechanisms in their gear. Out of curiosity, how would Danny's power interact with other Tinkers and Tinkertech? |
Ted chapter 6 . 11/19/2016 Been a while since I've looked at this. Cool to have an extended Alexandria scene, and it not just be a fight - sneaky Alexandria is best Alexandria. |
Chrome Cheetah chapter 6 . 11/11/2016 Can't wait for more! |
Twei chapter 1 . 11/3/2016 Fascinating, very different from normal. I like it. |
1Batman4u chapter 6 . 11/3/2016 Alexandria’s durability comes from her body being in a form of stasis, which stops the aging process and prevents healers from restoring the eye torn out by Siberian. A quote from her Worm wiki says “her body is more like a statue than flesh and blood”. Does stasis mean Alexandria cannot become pregnant? I bring this up because I assume that if Alexandria spends enough time inside an anti-power zone, she’ll eventually have her first menstrual cycle in a decade and realize it’s possible for her to become pregnant. Psychologically, people tend to romanticize the things life denies them. “Men of peace crave action, men of action crave peace.” Alexandria has spent years coming to terms with being sterile, so the sudden possibility of motherhood would throw her for a loop. |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/31/2016 great characters, cool |
OMAC001 chapter 6 . 10/31/2016 Love all this old school drama! Can't wait to see if the Mafia survives! |
Krysvun chapter 6 . 10/30/2016 I'm waiting to see what Danny's reaction will be. |
Guest chapter 6 . 10/30/2016 You know, Batman was first published in 1939, so it's entirely possible Alexandria is taking subconscious cues from him :-P |
beserkerbeast chapter 5 . 10/19/2016 love to see more BB |
Mike chapter 1 . 9/2/2016 Interesting start. At last, somebody tries to break with the canon premise that Status Quo Is God. :) Let's see how it will develop. By the way, both Contessa and Doctor Mother look much less stupid than they were in canon, at least for now. Also, in canon Contessa were not a real precog - she could get SOME kind of prediction by analyzing the Path changes, but she was never mentioned as obtaining actual view of future events. These changes may be intentional, but I'd say they should be pointed out just in case. |
uo-chou chapter 5 . 8/23/2016 Awesome work. Now, why didn't Danny use his invention to cancel the active effect's of fireboy's power? |
Guest chapter 5 . 8/22/2016 Yeaaah, it's back! Absolutely wonderful, the plot is picking up and it's getting good, please keep going. |
GMM chapter 5 . 8/22/2016 I usually hate leaving these sorts of reviews, wanting to write something of a bit more substance, but I've got to say I'm glad you updated and hope you update again soon. This is a very interesting fic. |