This was so romantic and cute, I loved it. This is just... I think it's perfect. The style was so gorgeous and the wording so eloquent. Fantastic story, five stars!

This was great. Lovely style of writing. I easily became absorbed in this.

Please write another chapter, this was amazing and well written. This is probably the first time I've read a story of this nature and actually liked the writing style. (not to mention this was, well, perfectly smutty)