Reviews for Deterioration
89ingenting chapter 7 . 10/8/2017
Not really a review, but... Just writing to tell you I miss this. Don't know what happened, but I really hope you pick this up one day. I absolutely love how you handle writing Obito's feelings in this.
FrostyFeet chapter 7 . 8/6/2017
I hope you see those even though it's on a pretty old story. The way you right really captures how obito feels and that keeps me looking forward to the next sentence all the way until the end. All in all, you did great!
speckledsparrow chapter 7 . 3/9/2017
Sucks that it seems you've abandoned this, but it was really fun while it lasted :)
SilverJoJo chapter 1 . 3/8/2017
This is a really good story, it has so much potential the writing is awsome and the way Obito is just...A good character to read, so please update
majabroysland chapter 7 . 3/3/2017
This is a really good story!
SilverJoJo chapter 7 . 2/19/2017
Please continue this
Tiger chapter 7 . 12/19/2016
You're amazing with writing mental exhaustion!
I am curious on what will happen when he meets Kakashi or Minato angain. And how (if) the Sanbi event happens without Rin (someone else becomes the victim?).
FlowOfEna chapter 7 . 12/17/2016
I enjoy every chapter you post, no matter how poorly it's written :) So, I see that the plot's slightly picking up the pace, and that you introduced a new character as well. That will certainly spark some conflict within the story and add some dynamics that will surely lead to something...more. Both good and bad. I also noted that there isn't as many philosophical thoughts about death when Obito's thinking about something absentmindedly, and that his depressing thoughts are replaced with human interactions. Definitely more enjoyable then seeing Obito's blank thoughts and melancholy hallucinations; with Orochimaru to boot! God, what is going on in Orochimaru's head - when you see that scary ass glint in his snake - like eyes, you know you fucked up for good.

Ah! I've been babbling for way too long! Sorry about the inconvenience! .;; I'm looking forward to the future chapters :D
Obito's fan chapter 7 . 12/8/2016
Where is Kakashi? Isn't he is like...treat Obito like a precious friend in canon? I hope Obito will start using his sharingan to memorize good happy things or maybe make Obito slaughters his clan (lol), leaving Shisui, Itachi, and Sasuke alive or maybe including both Mikoto and Fugaku, it would be interesting to see their reaction about canon Obito's actions.
Alienfromuniquespace chapter 7 . 12/9/2016
Aw, massacre won't happen? This chapter 7 kind of make me think twice, part of me want to see Obito massacre all the Uchiha (except Shisui, Itachi, and Sasuke, because I don't think Itachi has any reasons to kill his whole clan when kyuubi attack never happened in this AU), the other part of wish Obito finally found his happiness through Shisui and Itachi (or maybe Kakashi).
Thank you for update, I truly love your Obito story.
Kris Senju chapter 7 . 12/6/2016
I really enjoyed this chapter. I hope he meets itachi. I know its going to be a very long time before he's okay. I just he gets their. man dreaming of obikaka hoping they meet and maybe you know shabang.
themirrorminder.372259 chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
I can't even convey how much I absolutely LOVE this story! It is so, so, SO well-written! The one thing I'm a little confused about though is where Minato is! I mean, shouldn't he be trying to help his student? And what about Kakashi - shouldn't he care that Obito has gone robot? But oh gosh, you write Shisui so well, and in my head all I can think is how terrified I am that Shisui will die at some part in this story and I'm already bringing out my tissue boxes :( !
Your writing is incredible, and I really can't wait for the next chapter :)
LuckyBug192 chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
Thank you so much for updating~ Your fic gives me life!
Rabbit Pie chapter 7 . 12/4/2016
Oooooo I haven't seen that idea - with memory - put quite like that although I've seen it so any similar ways that I am just so bewildered that I haven't! Such a natural expression of other headcanons about the sharingan. It's awesome. Feels very genuine.

Your fic continues to be vivid and emotive and intimate, as always!
Forlorn Story Teller chapter 6 . 11/10/2016
I don't agree with that saying to be honest, as in vague sense if it doesn't kill me doesn't mean it won't leave me half-dead at least and how is that make me stronger?
Though I can imagine this saying as an escape for stressed Shinobi to keep going, especially Obito in this fic. That saying fit him like a glove.

I wish there's more fic on Obito like yours... keep it up!
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