Hi, just wanted to let you know I'm loving this.

What happened to maze?! Did she survive?! Did she die?! What?! Other than that I loved this story

What a beautiful story! I loved this Lucifer who was more in touch with and ready to believe his feelings!

I'm liking the story a lot but, to be honest, it's a bit unrealistic to think that a trained police is going to deliver the evidence of their case only because of the threat that they are going to hurt someone they kare about whithout proof that they are close or have a way to approach that person. No case would be solved like this Every time someone was suspected they would simply threaten to harm a loved member of their family and thats it.

I think at least you could add some kind of proof even if it's nothing more that a recording of Lucifer saying the word "detective"

I loved this story. it was great

This story is the worst thing i have ever read. and trust i do nothig but read.

This was an awesome love story.
Thank you,
Patti

can you make a sequel?

Wonderful story

Awwww ** So cute and so sad!

This case is so creepy Oo I like it so far!

Dan, you bastard! I'm glad is not like this in the show. X(

Argh! Maze I do like you but...now I hate you!
They were so close to kiss! Too bad!

I like this first chapter.

As much as Dan "hurt" Chloe in the show, by making her look crazy about the Palmetto shooting that he was responsible for, I don't see him ever hitting Chloe, and NEVER hitting Trixie! Chloe is to strong of a women to stay with a wife beater. Im guessing you put that in so Lucifer would have feelings he'd never felt before. Otherwise, I'm quite enjoying it.