Their time apart is straight bullshit to me. Seeing how their time apart was handled, the fact they couldn't be a couple and do that 'just because' just absolute bs.

And Edward's dad is a complete retard... 'You were basically raised together so it'd be incest even tho she is no way shape or form related to you in any way'... Absolutely ludicrous.

Loved it!

And it is refreshing to read a fellow Aussie's work. It made me laugh - rage, gumtree and the Great Barrier Reef.

Bella definitely wasn't mature enough that first time, in fact she act like a complete child... At least he was more mature then her and didn't hold everything she did against her.

Very sweet. And original.

Ugh,the Towel! Haha
Thanks!

Loved it. What a nice ending.

Fabulous.

Love the way you've written this-a love story, but not overly gooey or precious, as some can be.

I really did enjoy this one. It's beautiful and sweet hope you'll continue this.

Love this especially all the little nods to Oz

Thank you so much for writing for us. We wish you the best of luck in the contest. (:

Loved this story x

Trying to get through all the entries before voting, but read this twice because it was lovely. Worth taking time over.

I knew they must be together. Great way to tie in the beginning and end.

Good luck.

3 love it.

Brilliant.