Reviews for Justice League: The World Breaker Comes
Jadex Imperia chapter 1 . 7/25
please update
Sanszilla2984 chapter 18 . 7/17
That’s why you do not mess with the hulk the Anger he gets The stronger he gets and if he’s at that level world breaker you better start running
I am vegito chapter 18 . 7/4
please update it man its a so much interesting story... not everyday one can find a good Hulk in Justice League story...
StoneTheLoner chapter 8 . 6/23
I don't really buy this caution of theirs. This isn't the marvel universe, you don't get to have characters react like people who understand Bruce's condition and get away with it. In the first place superpowered people say things all the time and you can't assume based on just one of them that that's how their powers work. "You won't like me when I'm angry" could easily be misconstrued as trying to be intimidating instead of a genuine warning. An inane comment. For all they know Bruce is in complete control when he goes green. It doesn't make sense for Waller to start operating under the assumption that he loses control when angry. There's a hint of the truth in Bruce's comment, but Waller doesn't have enough of the puzzle pieces yet to have an accurate picture. She shouldn't know that yet. It's too soon and again, it's a problem because I just don't buy it. It's not believable. He's too new to this world.
StoneTheLoner chapter 6 . 6/23
I hope you start using flashbacks more sparingly. Also that you won't make other characters c*nts at the drop of a hat so Bruce can slide in and take the girls. The flashback thing is more of a personal preference, but the latter suggests bashing which is almost always a bad thing. When a lot of readers are going to be fans of the now... c*ntified characters they'll start hating the rest of the story because of it. Or it starts to feel like contradictions and negative retcons force the new bashing narrative.

Maybe I'm wrong and that was just a one off scene, but in my experience moments like that lead to genuine character bashing. I'd say it happens 9 times out of 10 but I can remember ever seeing it not, so... Yeah, I'm kind of worried about where this is going to lead lol. If you have to cannibalize every other character to create drama then you aren't doing it right. They can clearly be the mc's antagonists while also being similar enough still to what your readers want them to be. You just have to write the situation right.
Guest chapter 18 . 6/19
Pls update love your story
Bladewolf101 chapter 18 . 5/31
If you ever continue this story, will there be a fight between Hulk and Doomsday in this story at some point?
SilmShady2006 chapter 18 . 5/15
With 5 beautiful ladies gunning for him, Bruce/Hulk will have his hands full, especially with Power Girl, if you catch my 'meaning'. XDXDXD Darkseid should be grateful that he isn't facing Cosmic Immortal Hulk or otherwise, It wouldn't end well for him.
I am vegito chapter 13 . 5/4
really interesting story please update
Shahzeb chapter 18 . 4/10
nice story. is this abandoned
trinity seven chapter 13 . 4/2
the juggernaut come to the dc universe?
Trinity seven chapter 18 . 3/30
I wish peter parker from your phoenix story was on the web to help
trinity seven chapter 18 . 3/28
Will Grail be in the harem?
SlayerOfFFStorys chapter 18 . 3/28
Darkseid doesn't know who he's dealing with, Bruce/Hulk has been through, done and seen crazy some sh*t that'll make their fight look like a cake walk by comparison. Since Power Girl is one of Bruce/Hulk's hookups, I wonder how a hybrid child (half gamma mutant of unlimited strength & rage, half god-like alien and half human) of theirs would be like? "Overpowered" probably wouldn't began to describe the kid. Lmao

Also, please update this story! It's been 4 years, dude!
Jonrocksthestar chapter 18 . 3/26
Are you going to include the one below all?
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