Yeah this chap ruined it for me

Update the story please

i am just imagining magnhild with reinhardts voice lol

lmao his semblance is beyond useless

cue fortunate son with bombs of choc milk and tea napalm being dropped on the infected while jaune and ren fire bullets made from soda and water

firstly yes Arkos moments and arkos! haha..secondly can see Jaune semblance more akin to weapon bond? where thw more he bonds with weapons the more he can borrow their chracteristics? at least that is what i can guess from the story so far...He is going to take the saying "one with your weapon" to the next step haha...Look forward for more of your good stuff as i can literally see these adventure in my head when i read it and you dont follow a overly rigid canon format n just make jaune akwardly tack on rwby team adventure and change absolutely nothing like a lot of author did...Its nice to see JNPR moments and boonding since I love the concept of misfits and outcasts banding together...Alqays feel like it lovely rather than the blantantly main character cast of RWBY ...I love the underdogs and i like chracters who can put pthers above themself especially in hard timw cause i feel thats a important chracteristic one need especially when you are in a war or a fight for your life which all in remnant is wssentially doing and not preparing for something and hoping it wont come is ridiculously stupid...anyway hope to see more JNPR bonding moments and hope Pyrrha death wont happen...maybe Jaune making Milo promise to never let pyrrha over extend herself and that for him to tell him if she ever want to do that or risk herself or sacrifice herself since I am pretty sure Jaune who is closer in this stoey to her will realise her tendency much more faster ...Perhaps if fall of beacon happen he end up puahing Pyrrha into the locker instead and order ren and nora to take of her and wach other...while he stall cinder..he might pass crocea mors to pyrrha for awhile and...he is presumed dead to a cut off arm or something while he manage to survive and gain a waepon arm from it? due to his current strange ability which like i saod earlier os the next evolution of his semblance i think... He will rejoin them later in the battle at heaven of course...or when tyrian ambush them...the arrow will be show but held back from killing him due to the metal covering his vital organ n he fall of the tower...so cinder never confirm the kill since ruby will pop in at that time...which i feel will make a excellent end to that arv before heading to the next arc!

Awesome story continue please.

At the “Jaune boy, thank you for looking out for little girl” line, I started imaging Magnhild with a Russian accent, something like the Heavy from TF2

Does StormFlower talk as seldom as Ren does?

what teh frick? OOBLECK IS NOT EVIL WHAT IS WRONG WITH YOU?

Jaune talks about not being as good as his classmates but he managed to take one of them out in a three on one match. That makes him stronger than Ren even with Ren having an advantage of 2 people backing him up.

If huntsmen and huntresses are anything like real law enforcement, they wouldn’t go killing some people who are just standing guard. Plus, you’d have to be pretty fucking jaded to not bat an eye at killing people. It just seemed a bit off for characters for are supposedly heroic.

Eugh, Arkos.

Ahhh but Crocea x Aux

Why the hell would you keep ripping off the blades if it hurts? Clearly that must mean removing them is injuring you and not helping, it’s like if I kept ripping out my finger nails whenever they grew back

The wait is killing me!

...God, I'm addicted to this story.

AND THAT'S AN ORDER! Please, for the love of (insert deity here) that Sgt. Slaughter was a reference to the wrestler, otherwise this comment doesn't make much sense...