I think I've read nearly all of the Scotch fics posted, here, by now. And I have to say that this is one of my favorites. It's amazing, really, that it already could be with only three chapters so far. I definitely attribute that to your exceptional writing. You not only have a wonderful grasp of the characters, but a true gift for storytelling. I really hope that time and inspiration will bring you back with more.

PS: You remind me of another talented writer I adore in another fandom with a similar username, and I was wondering if you could be the same willowwisp that posts stories for General Hospital?

Either way, thanks for sharing! And I hope to see you return :)

I know it’s been a few years since you wrote this, but I wish you would finish it. I just re-read it, In my opinion It could be made to a very humorous story. And I think we all need to laugh a little bit more

I’m hooked on this story. Too bad it hasn’t been updated in over a year. I can’t wait to see Rachel reunited with her grandparents.

Great story

really enjoying this. please update soon.

I love this! Please make more chapters of this, its great and I kinda wanna know what happens next. So please? (-/\-)

The pillow toss - just perfect. I loved this chapter. Beautifully written. The interaction between Tom and Rachel is great. Her family being part of the aristocracy and her reaction to it is priceless. Thoroughly enjoying this story. Waiting for the next installment.

Look forward to more!

Loved the beginning of this chapter with Rachel calling Tom out on not having the surgery yet. He is so used to calling the shots that he obviously needs someone looking out for him.

Oh, and love the mystery with Wolf and Sasha. Super interested to see where you are going with that.

The Tex/Rachel interaction was great. Tex is such a blast.

Finally, I love that you had some of Rachel's family survive and her reaction to that news was so perfectly done. I can imagine it happening exactly like that.

I love what you did here, weaving together the short bits to connect the previous lab destruction to the new agent and to Rachel's family. She's never had an easy time of it, has she. I bet thatvs part of what makes her so strong and makes her value other people so much. I am really looking forward to your next chapter. -EMW

A Chapter and what a surprise. Her family still lives. Things are going well. Love your back story on this and I wonder why Wolf reacted to Sasha the way he did. There must be a good back story there. If you saw the new TLS spoiler. it looks like Sasha has history with Chandler, if I heard right.

really enjoying the interaction between Tom and Rachel. look forward to more.

Sweet! I love it when Rachel bosses Tom around! The Navy captain who has taken on crazy Russian Admirals, Immune terrorists is bullied into submission by a petite British Doctor! And Rachel is the Grand-daughter of an earl ? Oh myyyy!

Sorry I am so late in reviewing - I have been behind in my reading. But I love to this chapter as much as the first! The beginning with Tex was so exactly what he would have done - and I *do* want to know where he found helium. I really liked the visit with Danny and Kara, too. Danny was as clueless as ever, of course. But Rachel needed to know just how much people wanted to see her I do hope that you add more once inspiration strikes. This story has just been so lovely!

Everyone was so adorable in this, especially Tex and Tom, though in different ways. Laughed so hard about the balloons and the line about where the hell he had got them with an apocalypse happening outside, but the fact at he did, and the helium too, is very Tex. Tom was so sweet too, I hope you have Rachel confront Tom about her discovery that he had stayed with her instead of going with alpha team, which he always did. Great chapter! :-D