| Reviews for Challenger |
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   Chimera608 chapter 29 . 19h Please update this story soon. I want to see ash vs Koga rematch and I want ash to travel to another regions. Oh yeah since ash doesn’t have a fighting type yet could you give him a riolu please since after 12 whole years the anime finally gave him a riolu. |
| Guest chapter 29 . 7/28 Please update soon! You just brought Pikachu and it’s been almost a year since your last update! |
| No1 reviewed chapter 29 . 7/28 Has this story been abandoned If so thats a shame i really enjooyed reading it But i guess all good things have to meet their end at some point |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/25 I hope Ash gets Mega Charizard Y he definitely deserves one after Trevor robbed him of one in the Kalos League. And it’s my favorite Mega Evolution |
| Charimus chapter 29 . 7/25 OOF! When are you coming back? Also, I wanna write my own "Better ASh" kind of story and I am heavily inspired by yours. Could you please give me some tips? Also, have loved the story so far, and I like where you're taking the characters! Come back please! |
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/24 Oooohh I smell a hint of Pokeshipping (which is my favorite Pokémon shipping so thank you) |
| Juho Pakkanen chapter 10 . 7/23 Venonat line isnt psychcic type its bug poison |
| luffy180 chapter 29 . 7/22 Really looking forward to the rematch against Koga! Great story! |
| Curdling chapter 1 . 7/2 Are you actually going to do anything with Spectre? You kind of just, have him there. And what’s with basically having Ash’s Canon pokemon, and then giving them away, I’ve noticed the pattern, what with Mankey and Froakie. |
| Huge Fan chapter 29 . 6/27 Hope you’re doing well, I think I speak for everyone and say we hope you update this awesome story and some of your other stories soon! I hope you and your family are safe during these crazy times! |
| Jekke604 chapter 29 . 6/17 Good way to slip in the changed timetable to the conference. If you remove the AN talking about the change it would be an "unexpected" but clearly planned development. I hope you'll update again soon. Grts Jekke604 |
| Jekke604 chapter 27 . 6/17 Instead of editing everything so the conference takes place in one year you might consider it being moves up so to speak. Not sure how you would do it but it is probably easier and more interesting then just changing it. If you can't think of something good to explain it though don't do it. Anyway I hope you get out of your writingsblock and continue this story since it is one of the best ones on the site. Grts Jekke604 |
| MisfitWatcher chapter 7 . 6/16 Erika definitely giving off strong Ara Ara Onee-sama vibes |
| MisfitWatcher chapter 7 . 6/16 The way you handled the rivals and actually made them good is one of the many things I love about this fic. |
| Guest chapter 29 . 6/12 This is really good I can’t wait till you update the story. |
