Thank you

This is a great story

Good story

Nice job!
Lot of twists & turns.
And, while a little rough, your English is probably better than some of the people whose first language is English!

I really enjoyed every detail in this fiction and i loved the ending. Can't wait to read the sequel.

I really enjoyed this fiction. Can't wait to read more. I loved your writing style.

A lovely story. I loved the ending. McGee is my favorite too

An interesting story and a great complicated plot. I really liked that each chapter is full of events nothing boring here, i read each and every word. i have read a few McGee stories that shows him as a total helpless loser who needs protection, but here the McGee character is valued and presented as a tough unbreakable person who knows what he wants.
To tell you the truth i'm not a McGee fan, i mean he's nice and everything, but i'm a DiNozzo and i always read DiNozzo fiction but i liked this one.
Great story.

I really loved the story and i would love to read a sequel for it.

I really liked the story. Will you be writing a sequel?

I like it thnx

A lovely story and a Good ending

Stew should have been punched in the face for what he did. Tim should have done that
Anyway i enjoyed this fiction. Are you gonna write a sequel for this story soon?

So far so good. i like your writing style very interesting. Poor Tim :(
Abby please get lost, you don't deserve Tim

Hi. I really enjoyed your story. Hope to see more.