it was nice... though sad on Seto's part...and Ryuuji's. T-T

aww, that's sad...but it's a good one-shot. I think this is the first one I've read that has a sad ending-dont' do that much. But this is good.

Good job.

that was so emotional! i don't really like the pairing, but i just had to read more of your stories as you stopped 'look the other way' and basically my source of inspiration. your writing style is just so deep! i really admire the way you manage to make everything work out so well and fit! and i think they were really in character too. in short, you're the best! _

*Wipes tears away* Damn that was sad. But good in an angsty depressing way.

*tears well up in eyes* Oh gosh... that was so sad. I feel kinda bad too because I'm having some uncertain feelings about my own boyfriend-of-one-year. Thank you for the inspiration. I think I'll call him. ~Shinigami

Hm...makes me all introspective n'shtuff.

oh was so beautiful and sad and SO well written. I LOVE YOUR FICTION! They're SO good! Keep on writing!

ur cooliosis fan,

_.-meGGerZ-._

So sad. And yet so beautifully written, charged with emotion and spent-up feelings. It was wonderful, PM. *huggles PM* Amazing job, as usual.

~Neko-chan

This fic has the depth that so many angst fics lack. Very Seto-y. I think you've captured a side of Kaiba that most writers ignore, and did it very well. I can see that you put feelings into your work, which is what every story needs. _

Shoot, PM, this was totally...wicked, for a lack of better wording. Seriously, I'm not really in the mood for depressing love stories, yet, yours intrigued me (with the coupling) so much...that I really had no choice, and you know, I believe that now I have an urging to run out and write a Seto*Ryuuji angst fic...maybe it's the way your wrote it, that makes angst seem like the only genre anyone could ever write with those two. Completely original, completely awing and breath-taking in the bitter stillness of Seto's heart...I really mean that, and hell, this was just amazing. Please, if you ever get the chance, write another Seto*Ryuuji. _

- Dark Eyed, a.k.a. Slanting Reality

I enjoyed! even if it was pretty depressing. Not that i really ever wrote a "happy fiv". Theres not enough otogi fics... not ones where he has any kinda personality or importance ou there... I have a strange facination with him...

Well, I actually forget my point. lol... erm, yah. LOL!

I like! But you write to many depressing stories. But that's okay. _ I don't have much to say... But I do like it.

actually, literally translated, mou hitori no Yugi would mean: my other Yugi, which kinda sounds odd, but whatever.

Good job!

This was really good... you have a great writing style, and you bring up a lot of interesting points about Seto. However, I don't understand why Ryuuji thought Seto was afraid of commitment. In your fic, you mention the problems he had in other relationships was that he spent too much time at work, etc. I'm not sure if Ryuuji would have necessarily thought that Seto was commitment-phobic, which usually manifests itself in a desire to date other people or an unwillingness to use terms of endearment. You made it obvious that Seto was not unwilling to use loving gestures. I don't really see how the situation Seto's in connects to commitment. Anyway, this is a really well-written fic.

Seto*Otogi is really a coupling that had never crossed my mind before... It worked surprisingly well. Good writing (again). Your Seto was quite... interesting in this. I liked it! _