I really like the direction of this story! It’s nice to see the friendship dynamic between Quil, Embry, Leah and Jake. I also love how Jacob’s maturing and moving on from Bella.

I appreciate how you haven’t dived right into Jacob x Leah, I feel as though this set up makes it a much more diverse and interesting story.

when will you update?

bonus point huh? can I say it's a Bruce Lee poster from Enter the Dragon or Game of Death? :

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Hi,
This sounds like a really good story. So, I look forward to reading more chapters...
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Sigue por favor!

Good on Leah! The boys. (and imprints), in the Pack have always been hypocritical when it comes to difficult situations. I like that Leah has called Sam out on his bull&$*!

Fantastic job.

More please! This is really good! 3

That was way to lenient on him, on Leah's part. Embry is a softy, and Quill got his kicks, so I'm hoping a more personal apology is in order. And I'm hoping you write about the Sam thing too.

Bella is a selfish person. I cannot wait for more.

Ohh man, i love see leah bonding with the pack, i think that just suits so well for hear! And you have done perfectly, im looking forward for the next chapter!

Embry was good, he was calm and helpful talking to Leah. Is Jacob Alpha? Will he and Sam fight over Bella's pregnancy? Jacob did seem neutral about her after the fight with his Pack. Maybe he's beginning to appreciate them. Looking forward to the rest.

Totally amazing.

I love this please update

Oh dear O.O
well this story is still good, update soon