Loved this! I read and reread! I can't get enough! Great job!

This story combines everything I love: Literati, traveling, and writing *Insert heart eyed emoji*
You are a wonderful writer, I really enjoyed reading this. Seriously, please come back with another story, I can't wait. Thanks! Xx

Damn you. The whole wedding part had me in tears!

It all worked out. She accomplished all that she set out to do, and accomplished things she was t even planning on too!

Whoa! Did he fly them in with him in hopes that she wanted to get married or did he fly them in a couple of days later and they happened to have "discovered" them on one of their walks? Did I miss something again?

Im glad she stepped outside of her comfort zone and went to Japan. It was funny that she was kind of gawking at the foreigners when she realized that it was she who was the foreign one. Lane working out and actually making it to New Zealand was great because it got Rory to see the light. And now Jess is in Hawaii? Who told him? Was he subscribing to the blog? Of course Kirk is making money off her blog.

And so she assumes they're broken up? As long as she doesn't hook up with anybody, at least not for a long while, she still has the door open to go back. Now lorelai's message even makes more sense. She knew it was coming. Is dean going to pop up, not ask for lorelai's permission, and propose?

Wow! The proposal was so completely unexpected. It's so soon!

Did you plan the lorelai/Paris/elopement thing on purpose or did it all work out that way? It was pretty cool that it all goes in together.

I don't really like this Rory. She seems to have this defeatist attitude about her. This Jess is pretty cool, but it's not really about him. I hope Rory gets an article accepted soon.

Not that this will help this story, but when you change scenes, can you use a line divider or something? Whenever I get to that point, I sometimes get confused because it makes me think I missed something. So then I go back like a loser. I don't want to be a loser :(

My favorite part in this chapter was when Rory told Jess he had some low self esteem by his lip.

Did they have a talk that wasn't mentioned? How did they go from not sure if they were starting something to nuzzling her neck?

So did he not get her text somehow and that's why he was sad sounding when he finally called her a week later? I wasn't reading too carefully because I was distracted and don't want to go back because Jess and London are coming up.

Briana sounds like such a joy. She saved them from so much awkwardness with her laughter.

I liked the subtle/not subtle way she brought up not being with Logan.

Interesting way to spell Derek. At least I hope it's Derek. It's interesting enough to look like its on purpose and not incorrectly spelled.

Yea! Nice fake out with the Lane text.