Reviews for Heartless
erbkaiser chapter 1 . 4/24
Wonderfully terrible. A Taylor 'Escalation' Hebert/Vasil growing up like this could be horribly effective, especially if QA pings on 'daddy' and goes full Khepri early on.
Azreal02 chapter 1 . 10/19/2018
This is a great short. If you leave it, you should really update it with a more conclusive ending!

Love this story. Taylor always has an edge of horror to her, and that leads me to imagine what it would be like with this flavor to it. Thank you for writing.
zev.jagalur chapter 1 . 9/3/2018
Could you give me the link to the prim story?
FreelanceBum chapter 1 . 10/21/2017
I still would love a Vasil!Taylor fic. Although proper, with a bud from Heartbreaker. How I met your Monster is amazing to me for exploring that power and mindset.
argentorum chapter 1 . 4/6/2016
I... Didn't know how much I wanted this. Please, show me more.
Xillais chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
This is so fucked up.

More?
ZomBguy chapter 1 . 3/13/2016
Interesting concept could have her bond with Alec and have them leave together to the bay.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/29/2016
gross
Mingyu chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
A world where Taylor does not have a moral compass (or at least has a very low chance of getting one) scares me. Still, she makes for a cute potential sociopath. Chibi Taylor is the best Taylor. Thanks for the chapter!
Mark Of Cain chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
I really hope that you take full advantage here, especially when it comes to powers. You're notes specifically say that Taylor is still Danny's daughter, so it's possible she has the QA shard. And she's bound to pick up another bud with all the time she's spent with Heartbreaker and his family. So I'm really hoping to see you get creative with the powers that come from this combination.

I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
jdboss1 chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
Heartbreaker HAHAHHAHAHAH

we need to see more of Heartbreaker
UniCryin chapter 1 . 2/27/2016
Amazing!

Fav'd!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
Horrifying, but I really want to see more!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
Ooh, I like this.
Major Session chapter 1 . 2/26/2016
This is both an interesting and terrifying prospect. Because if Taylor triggers with a bud from Heartbreaker (if she got something even remotely as broken as Cherish... Goodbye America) well, bad end for Earth-Bet. If she triggers with QA still somehow... Imagine Skitter with Regent or Cherish's emotional issues. Worst End for Earth-Bet, because that would turn out a skitter who'd likely get scouted by the Slaughterhouse 9.

And keep posting these old snips please Leikiz, some I remember and it's a joy to read again. Others are new because I missed them (like this one) and are great to discover.
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