So, finally the story is done. Vector with Pixel, Connor has gone back to his home, Switch is staying, and the others are going back to normal. I like how you write N00b and Switch conversing about flying island lol.

"We've got no power but I assure you we'll do what we can."
After Hertz said that, my thought is exactly the same as Pixel lol.
NB: You got some typo on author note: "two young"

Ookaaayyy... So, the glitch is apparently made because of the case about joey being separated from its mother. But what about the mewtwo? Hmmm.
I need to know the next action XD

Change of scenery :D
I didn't understand about that stone door thing though... but no, don't answer it here lol. Better wait for the next chapter!

When Pixel thought about this: "So far it was only Gyro who she hadn't picked up an odd vocal trait from." I have been searching what trait that K has lol. And in the end, I noticed that I missed the word: "Kool" hahaha.

Don't tell me in the end Vector will be dead O.o
One of the first paragraph about Hertz is hilarious. "... her pokemon form was about as good at flying as he was swimming ..." "have to be rescued by a life guard" lol

So even you, the author, not missing the main character Pixel the most huh? I don't missed everybody.
Oh well I'm joking, don't take it to heart hahaha.
But seriously, when you said you will miss Switch and Vector, I thought they will be killed in the end... So when Vector touch the frozen Unown... ... ... I will waiting the next chapter instead :p

I swear this fic might actually make me cry.

Wait what you already have this done how much time do you have to write seriously

Er... Oh dear Arceus... thick British accents...

If I caught the virus, I would want to turn into a genderless stick. I'm just saying.

Well, RIP Leaf. Didn't like him anyways.

I'm a terrible person.

Hertz seemed desperate to find the meowstic. For the meowstic himself, I think Vector coughed blood because he constantly erased the cracks. The last part though... I still didn't understand how a mawile can befriend a mew hahaha.

I'm now upset with you for killing Leaf.

The moment I read a word that was an egg shell, I know they had walk into a disaster. That Ivysaur though... you killed him? O.o

Well right now it's either leave or face that gallade and his goons, and ..., too!"
You missed a quotation mark.
Well Vector better get up, I need to know what happened to him.

"Pixel stepped out of the small room after being interrogated by every question the linoone could possibly ask her." This sentence has "the linoone" word which is I believe to be better with "a linoone" one. I don't know how to say that. But I know that the linoone is not appeared in previous sentences.

You bet I'm hype, even though I can't play them.

Lillipup have opposable thumbs now! And don't want cake! Blasphemy! Why am I speaking in exclamatory sentences!?

X's humor is x-traordinary! An x-ample we should all follow! X-actly what we all-

Wait.

What.