lol keep this going

Nice chapter,

Nice chapter

Nice

Interesting

ok now this is ridiculous just combine the chapters instead of posting this short ass shit

um ok so is this slash? if not then you need to name the fiancee.

This needs a serious rewrite to separate conversations and frankly remove that sad excuse of a list.

You know the length of the chapter should bother me but it doesn't it just makes me want more. Great job cannot wait for the next chapter. I'm hoping there is a scene where Darrell tries to subtlety warn Harry to stay away from the cases without telling Harry about it and Harry finds it all amusing.

*Cough* Yeah just from that small section for Ginny's so-called betrayal I could just be more inclined to believe Ginny was planning on throwing a surprise threesome because really Romilda Vane?

Short chapters so far, but still interested to read more. Hope to see more

Please, try to edit the story a bit. (for example, seperate characters while there talking to each other). Other than that, seems interesting so far.

unusual pairing looking forward to how you develop it

good

Really like the story what little been published, just wish the chapters were a little longer. But keep up the good work.