I totally fell in love with this story in chapter 1 itself! One of the best plots! Really wish you'd continue it!

Nice story
Waiting for update

Coool!

Wow what a shocking reveal ha ha ha

it's been 4 years, please update

Please comeback and update this story! I love this story and Origins so much. I want to know what happens next in the story even if it has been years. It is so interesting and well written compared to others i’ve read. Please do update!

I think I’m going to have to read the origins story you mentioned earlier

Dun Dun DUN!

Please update this story! I just read 'The origins of Naruto' and this one back to back and they are absolutely amazing!

HOAOAOAOOAOAOAO CANT WAIT FOR MROEORE

Oh please please continue this story! I can't count how many times i have read it (and 'The Origins of Naruto', of course). They are fantastically well written and so so interesting. Also they are exactly what i have been looking for and more. I can't describe you how delightful i was when i have first read them so many years ago. Really, the absolution they bring me is beyond words. And as such i hope you will find inspiration, words, time or whatever it is that you need (and very very soon please (pleasepleasepleasepleaaaaaaseeeeee)), as after so many years (it was more than 3!) i can barely wait for next update of this wonderful story (not that i was coping with waiting any better before; it was always a little bit unbearable considering how delectable and alluring is this tale) - especially since in next chapter we should (hopefully) team 4 reunited (and oh, i so love! their interaction). So again, please please please, update this fanfiction soon (pretty please?) and no matter what DO NOT let it die out. And no matter what know that you have at least on reader who is kept on their toes and is eagerly (and impatiently (sorry your story is just that good)) waiting for every word of this fanfiction. (And just to show you home much i actually like this two tales you should know, even though i have kind of already written it, that i have discovered them few years before your last update more than 3 years ago, and thus have reread them many times. As i have stated before, i have fallen in love with them.)
In some (at least a little bit egoistical and all together selfish, for reasons clearly described above) hope that this comment will inspire you or move you (or whatever, just start writing),
your immensely mesmerized reader.

i keep rereading this story! Naruto is well developed and characterized as is Sasuke! i hope to read more soon!

This is beautifully written! I really love the dynamic that you created between all of the characters. I hope that you are able to continue writing this story...I would love to see where this goes :D

Hi. So first, I want to say thank you for writing this beautiful literary work that has made me love this series again. Second, I want to say thank you for the time and efforts you have taken to write, edit and publish this. I speak for myself here but it means a lot to see and be able to read this. Thank you.

Third, hot damn. I love the way you wrote everyone in this. You got Itachi’s tenderness and kindness down pat. You got Naruto’s confidence and optimism down but still did him justice when maturing him the way you did. Anko is goal and makes me love her even more. Genma is so like what I’ve seen of him in the series, it’s uncanny, but he still has that charm that is unique to your writing and

I came looking for a story that had Itachi and fix it and you delivered. Thank you for that.

I just wanted to pop in and thanks. We all know how far and rare reviews have become. Thanks again for your wonderful stories!

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