I know that I'm like, years late and all, but

Team BRYL/Beryl (Blake Ruby Yang Louise)

Perfect name for a team with Blake on it.

So... why the hell did Ozpin just reveal the biggest secret of all time to a complete stranger?

This is really good! :D are you gonna continue this story? :)

This is so hilariously outdated. Shitty fanfic is shitty.

Please write a sequel

WAIT! I JUST REMEMBERED VELV'S SEMBLANCE!
DID LOUISE SOMEHOW *KISS* VELV? IT SOUNDS LIKE GANDALFR, HOLY SHIT IT'S LIKE POTTERY!oh baby, we in Canon Territory!
a shame that this is only a two-shot. a real shame.
I still like this remix though.I also remembered that Louise and Coco is 2/3 of Neopolitan. who will be the Vanilla?well Crater Face never happened. that's new, I for writing this.

Void AuraOP! OP! OP!
also, nice setup for the L in CRDL omake. Where did Sky go?
The Void Maiden and the Silver-eyed Warrior go on adventures with the remnants of Team JNPR. We need to stick the L or V somwhere in RNJR. Good job on this.

muy genial haz eso por favor

If I could make a suggestion have Louise Void Magic adjust itself to become similar to the maidens power like a Void Maiden if you will. Y'know sense the four Seasons revolve around an element.

Yeah... after reading Emergence, this story is laughably bad and generic...

Seriously, that story knew weave people from another world coming to another one, more specifically the RWBY verse coming to ours. This is just the same, 'Louise goes to another world, becomes a badass' cliche tripe we've all seen before. Even if you did avoid one cliche, it doesn't remove the ones you used liberally in this one.

Thumbs down.

Awesome! So when is the next chapter going to be?

This was worth the read, nicely done.

Seriously dude, just do it. Great plot, great character development, and great writer behind it all.

Just go for it.

Second chapter was far better. The meshing between them though is a mess - is the first chapter supposed to be snippets or what?

The first half of the chapter is straight up unreadable. Continuous exposition is dry and dull.