You succeeded at capturing emotion and making umbridge especially detestable

I now officially hate Umbridge for insulting my Danny. Tell her to run before she faces my wrath. God! and Nice story. And the above message on hating Umbridge is for her.

rEY I CANT BELIEVE YOU WOULF MESS WITH MY EMOTIONS LIKE YHAT FLEKSOSNDK

I follow your tumblr (im phantomfalls) and I love this!

PLZ UPDATE :D

Wow holy shit. I cried a little bit.
That was tough to get through. But I did it.
Thx for the read!

at that point, I'd have Danny set that wand ablaze with his powers

Story caught my eye and I loved it

OH MY GOD THIS MIGHT BE MY FAVORITE THING YOU'VE WROTE. I'm dead. Holy crap. This is amazing. I literally don't have the words. I'm sorry! IT WAS THAT GOOD!

So good please continue!

Good job breaking my heart.