The prophecy was awesome. Such an excellent poem composition.

Waiting for the next chapter :)

Plots became more interesting here. I actually didn't notice it has ended already. Sorry I can't think of any flaw, I just enjoyed this chapter. Great job! You did well. Looking forward for the next chapter.

There are few confusing points, like the character's thoughts. But I guess the story is still on it's track in this chapter, like his concerns about his memories while at the examination. Good job.

I think the first two paragraphs should be in chapter 1. But more importantly, the story starts to build up here. Nice work.

The idea of the introduction is good. There are just few points I guess that are not well explained. Well I am just a reader I can't write a story so for me, for a new author, you did well. Just keep it up.